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Seeing the red
Under a universe of scrunched-up ink-belittled papers,
I cling to the theory of expansion, wishing for red stars.
The chimes wail to glorify the god-knows-how-many-th hour passed.
Eyelids propped open with diesel soaked matchsticks
watch exhausted hallucinations play out their parts.
The figures live out tragedies, lighters in hand.
Although I clap, I don't call for encore.
They introduce themselves as the four humours,
sanguine, choleric, melancholic, and phlegmatic.
I'm in grave danger of melancholic overflow:
"Write it out" they murmured,
handing me a pen.
Eventually, I saw the red.
I cling to the theory of expansion, wishing for red stars.
The chimes wail to glorify the god-knows-how-many-th hour passed.
Eyelids propped open with diesel soaked matchsticks
watch exhausted hallucinations play out their parts.
The figures live out tragedies, lighters in hand.
Although I clap, I don't call for encore.
They introduce themselves as the four humours,
sanguine, choleric, melancholic, and phlegmatic.
I'm in grave danger of melancholic overflow:
"Write it out" they murmured,
handing me a pen.
Eventually, I saw the red.
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Re: Seeing the red
5th May 2013 6:31pm
Astounding! I'm glad you informed me of this poem, well written miss Scribbler :)
I especially like the line of "Although I clap, I don't call for encore"
xox
I especially like the line of "Although I clap, I don't call for encore"
xox
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6th May 2013 8:15am
Anonymous
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6th May 2013 8:16am
Re: Seeing the red
5th May 2013 8:48pm
pure excellence written in Scribbler, this is the type o write I would fancy curled up in middle o the night perusing!!!
love it!!!
love it!!!
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6th May 2013 8:17am
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- Edited 15th May 2018 00:09am
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6th May 2013 1:12am
Anonymous
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re: Re: Seeing the red
6th May 2013 8:23am
Exactly, Mr Vortex,
though I'm more of a fan of blue;
thank you kindly, for your comment :)
though I'm more of a fan of blue;
thank you kindly, for your comment :)
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7th May 2013 4:47am
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