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Will I dream?
Filled with sadness like
a deep, mortal wound.
Wound that feels like
it will never heal.
A sorrow that pervades
my waking life.
In dreams I can forget
and not feel.
In sleep I can escape
and be as nothing.
Perhaps in death
I'm released forever.
But will I dream?
a deep, mortal wound.
Wound that feels like
it will never heal.
A sorrow that pervades
my waking life.
In dreams I can forget
and not feel.
In sleep I can escape
and be as nothing.
Perhaps in death
I'm released forever.
But will I dream?
Published 4th May 2013
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4th May 2013 8:15am
I thought the style you
used here worked well:
In dreams I can forget
and not feel.
In sleep I can escape
and be as nothing.
Perhaps in death
I'm released forever.
Captivating dark piece!
used here worked well:
In dreams I can forget
and not feel.
In sleep I can escape
and be as nothing.
Perhaps in death
I'm released forever.
Captivating dark piece!
4th May 2013 8:10pm
Anonymous
- Edited 15th May 2018 9:39pm
4th May 2013 11:29am
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4th May 2013 8:11pm