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fat lady
there are no words
nothing to say
shades of pink
all turned to grey
the song is over
the fat lady sung
from the ceiling
she silently hung.
nothing to say
shades of pink
all turned to grey
the song is over
the fat lady sung
from the ceiling
she silently hung.
Published 17th Oct 2010
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17th Oct 2010 6:34pm
This was a very powerful piece considering the shortness of the poem. The imagery, for me, consisted of a rather large woman in a pink ballroom gown (with WAY too much makeup on) hanging from the ceiling. Not a pleasant vision but you managed to make it beautiful. Great job, I love it. :D
17th Oct 2010 10:45pm
27th Oct 2010 1:57am
Got to agree with Jade on this. For such a short piece, the power you carry in your choice of words is brilliant, almost effortless.
Beautiful work!
Beautiful work!
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