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this is me
Pulled out a strand of hair
one by one
day by day
I was bruising
every minute I was gone , gone
going away
drifting
falling to make believe
It's wasn't alright
nor okay
call me a coward for willing it
praying to anyone
to take me to madness
because reality stinks
and i'd rather live in a lie
in the whispers
from strangers
in who they thought I was
and what they thought they knew
no more pain
I'll be safe
within myself
by myself
one by one
day by day
I was bruising
every minute I was gone , gone
going away
drifting
falling to make believe
It's wasn't alright
nor okay
call me a coward for willing it
praying to anyone
to take me to madness
because reality stinks
and i'd rather live in a lie
in the whispers
from strangers
in who they thought I was
and what they thought they knew
no more pain
I'll be safe
within myself
by myself
Published 1st May 2013
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1st May 2013 11:52pm
love this...
"in the whispers
from strangers
in who they thought I was
and what they thought they knew"
beautifully done, gigi. missed ya.
"in the whispers
from strangers
in who they thought I was
and what they thought they knew"
beautifully done, gigi. missed ya.
2nd May 2013 1:07am
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2nd May 2013 00:28am
praying to anyone
to take me to madness
Hearing that heart.......giving in giving out, breathing its life.....Beautiful you.
to take me to madness
Hearing that heart.......giving in giving out, breathing its life.....Beautiful you.
2nd May 2013 00:59am
nice gigi...this is my fav that I have read from you. Clear, concise, lovely wording and easily read through...great write!
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2nd May 2013 2:45pm
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2nd May 2013 7:24pm
nice gg. this is really good. a personal fav of yours. glad to see you are writing again lady....
4th May 2013 8:05am
4th May 2013 00:22am
sound gigi read this over and over,very powerful poem
and now im going to read it again
so good
sean
and now im going to read it again
so good
sean
4th May 2013 8:05am
4th May 2013 9:43am
