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Morning Rain
On the darkened pane
A slide off my memories
Of lonely yesteryears
I remember
Love died
Trust and faith
The will to live melted
Like frost on a summer day
Living not wanting to know
to feel to see to speak
Tranquil alone
Unfeeling
Living was merely breathing
Then Words like little raindrops
Fell one by one on a dead soul
The lifeless seed quivered
growth of hope on blackened
bulb, stubs of faith appeared
“It is raining this morning, My Angel!”
“That’s good, My Love, Rain cools…”
A slide off my memories
Of lonely yesteryears
I remember
Love died
Trust and faith
The will to live melted
Like frost on a summer day
Living not wanting to know
to feel to see to speak
Tranquil alone
Unfeeling
Living was merely breathing
Then Words like little raindrops
Fell one by one on a dead soul
The lifeless seed quivered
growth of hope on blackened
bulb, stubs of faith appeared
“It is raining this morning, My Angel!”
“That’s good, My Love, Rain cools…”
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1st May 2013 4:25pm
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1st May 2013 4:45pm
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1st May 2013 5:07pm
Hi Forsaken, thank you for dropping by and reading as well as commenting on the poem.
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1st May 2013 5:25pm
Mourganna,thanks for reading and commenting on the poem,I am humbled and honoured.
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1st May 2013 5:16pm
I thought I have read this before and I believe I have seen this comment by Soul as well:
A most Beautiful write Dear Grace!!!
Excellence in Pen!!!
What can I say, kind of weird feeling I guess...
A most Beautiful write Dear Grace!!!
Excellence in Pen!!!
What can I say, kind of weird feeling I guess...
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1st May 2013 5:27pm
I see...thats interesting. I must look that up eh..must be a double post somewhere...thank you for reading, EngrVV. You are always kind.
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2nd May 2013 00:09am
I lack on creative commenting...tis a fault...everything is "Beautiful" and many "indeed's" along with "Wonderful"....Always More is meant and felt with depth of furthest reach.
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2nd May 2013 00:14am
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2nd May 2013 3:22pm
It must have been me and not you Soul...I've seen and hear things before they actually happen and now, it baffles me if it's going to happen in other forms such as TV or this MEDIUM!
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2nd May 2013 6:44pm
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1st May 2013 5:30pm
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1st May 2013 5:49pm
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1st May 2013 5:59pm
I lift praises for the rain.......
.....most beautiful, heartfelt ink dear Grace.
.....most beautiful, heartfelt ink dear Grace.
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1st May 2013 6:32pm
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1st May 2013 7:32pm
The first two stanzas are quite sombre. Then a little hope glimmers towards the end. The rain is symbolic of hope after a period of miserable lovelorn hopelessness.
Good work, Grace. Your style is usually simple, yet elegant. Quite admirable.
Good work, Grace. Your style is usually simple, yet elegant. Quite admirable.
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1st May 2013 11:52pm