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Red Devil
Careful you do not get caught
in the her liquid amber stare,
she weaves a powerful spell
of weft and woven words
that entrap and ensnare.
She really is a wicked creature,
deliberately casting her net,
capturing any valiant enough to dare
call himself her love pet,
delving deep into her velvet fissure.
A coy game of cat and mouse creates,
in her eyes, a mischievous flame,
“let the games begin” she is heard to say.
An incorrigible sensual coquette,
all will be pray in her dulcet game.
“Still feeling mannish, wish to play”?
Haha… she laughs lustily
hands on her hips walking away,
as she sashays saucily,
looks over her shoulder and whispers…
“I dare you…”
in the her liquid amber stare,
she weaves a powerful spell
of weft and woven words
that entrap and ensnare.
She really is a wicked creature,
deliberately casting her net,
capturing any valiant enough to dare
call himself her love pet,
delving deep into her velvet fissure.
A coy game of cat and mouse creates,
in her eyes, a mischievous flame,
“let the games begin” she is heard to say.
An incorrigible sensual coquette,
all will be pray in her dulcet game.
“Still feeling mannish, wish to play”?
Haha… she laughs lustily
hands on her hips walking away,
as she sashays saucily,
looks over her shoulder and whispers…
“I dare you…”
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Re: Red Devil
30th Apr 2013 7:13pm
Wow i do indeed dare call me daredevil lol
A fiery write for sure.
Great stuff
Marcus
A fiery write for sure.
Great stuff
Marcus
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re: Re: Red Devil
30th Apr 2013 7:29pm
Naughty boy, oh behaaaave!!! lol Thanks Marcus glad you are feeling brave.
Red
Red
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30th Apr 2013 7:31pm
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30th Apr 2013 7:35pm
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30th Apr 2013 8:49pm
Re: Red Devil
30th Apr 2013 8:59pm
Wow Red!
You got that over the shoulder look down....no man can resist a good dare.
Love
G
You got that over the shoulder look down....no man can resist a good dare.
Love
G
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re: Re: Red Devil
30th Apr 2013 9:06pm
Re: Red Devil
30th Apr 2013 10:05pm
I love words. When I see them so competently and cleverly used, I get so carried away, so thrilled, I can read the poem over and over again till it rings in my mind on its own.
". . . her velvet fissure." This one kills me. It's an imagery rendered with elegant finesse; yet the whole poem is delivered with such concinnity and masterliness as befitting a professional.
". . . in her liquid amber stare . . . she laughs lustily . . . sashays saucily . . ." These are very clear and picturesque depictions. Nothing left to question.
Good work, Red. (Or should I say Red Devil). . . pun.
". . . her velvet fissure." This one kills me. It's an imagery rendered with elegant finesse; yet the whole poem is delivered with such concinnity and masterliness as befitting a professional.
". . . in her liquid amber stare . . . she laughs lustily . . . sashays saucily . . ." These are very clear and picturesque depictions. Nothing left to question.
Good work, Red. (Or should I say Red Devil). . . pun.
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Well what does a humble poetess say to such high praise, I strive with every new piece to deserve your loyalty and continued patronage. Thank you for allowing me to entertain you with my words.
Red
Red
Re: Red Devil
1st May 2013 2:39am
Quite The Spiced Write Hell Cat!!!
To Do a dare for such a stare, one should be so Lucky!!!
As Always Dear Red Such Sexiness Dripping from Pen!!!
Such Wit--adored
To Do a dare for such a stare, one should be so Lucky!!!
As Always Dear Red Such Sexiness Dripping from Pen!!!
Such Wit--adored
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re: Re: Red Devil
1st May 2013 12:46pm
Hahaha never been call a hell cat, that's a first, love it! Lol Thanks!
Red:-)
Red:-)
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6th May 2013 11:08pm
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7th May 2013 2:59pm
Re: Red Devil
13th May 2013 7:19pm
great poem! you could very well be describing my life experience lol. one small tip. change pray to prey.
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re: Re: Red Devil
13th May 2013 7:25pm
Thank you!Good looking out,got ya,had not seen that!
Yes I read your piece, the devil is a woman it was great. Thank you for stopping by to read and for the help.
Red
Yes I read your piece, the devil is a woman it was great. Thank you for stopping by to read and for the help.
Red
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re: Re: Red Devil
16th May 2013 5:16pm
Aaah Yes...
I weave and weft words
that tease the senses
to capture the curious
in my web's dark recesses...
Thank you Naajir for stopping by, glad you enjoyed this piece.
Red
I weave and weft words
that tease the senses
to capture the curious
in my web's dark recesses...
Thank you Naajir for stopping by, glad you enjoyed this piece.
Red
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16th May 2013 5:11pm