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My Scent
Hi baby, I came here today
looking for you and you
are here to do the same.
I know, with me, you want to be alone.
So why wait? Let’s us just leave,
the night is young and I plan be grown.
You and I know that in private
we are totally different,
that our moments of passion
we are filled with only instinct.
We keep this, an illicit secret,
a secret that is forbidden to all
but you, you're my temptation
and for you, I am not prohibited.
You tell me my scent mercilessly kills you
when we make love or have sex.
It slays you time and again,
like aphrodisiac you can not get enough of,
that it is heaven sent.
looking for you and you
are here to do the same.
I know, with me, you want to be alone.
So why wait? Let’s us just leave,
the night is young and I plan be grown.
You and I know that in private
we are totally different,
that our moments of passion
we are filled with only instinct.
We keep this, an illicit secret,
a secret that is forbidden to all
but you, you're my temptation
and for you, I am not prohibited.
You tell me my scent mercilessly kills you
when we make love or have sex.
It slays you time and again,
like aphrodisiac you can not get enough of,
that it is heaven sent.
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Re: My Scent
28th Apr 2013 7:59pm
Smells like a fantastic sweet write from your pen my dear.
Great stuff
Marcus
Great stuff
Marcus
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re: Re: My Scent
28th Apr 2013 8:12pm
Re: My Scent
28th Apr 2013 8:10pm
I agree with Marcus...What a delightful aroma your ink dispenses...Got me sniffing my screen...lol...How wonderfully sensuous this is ;-)
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re: Re: My Scent
28th Apr 2013 8:14pm
Hahaha ohhh I see I am gonna be in deeeep trouble with you boys today!!!haha what did it smell like D!Thanks for stopping by!
Red
Red
Re: My Scent
Anonymous
28th Apr 2013 9:54pm
Fantasy can become reality for those who have a vivid, creative and powerful imagination, such as yours, Red! This was sensual and lovely!
The Scent of your pen is intoxicating!:)
The Scent of your pen is intoxicating!:)
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28th Apr 2013 10:01pm
Re: My Scent
29th Apr 2013 00:54am
You got the boys sniffing around you again RED....you naughty girl you...I think some girls are too...nicely penned
much love
G
much love
G
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Re: My Scent
29th Apr 2013 3:46am
so sensual Dear Red!!!
Erotic cravings are always filled with Your fine Ink!!!
Erotic cravings are always filled with Your fine Ink!!!
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29th Apr 2013 1:34pm
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Re: My Scent
29th Apr 2013 11:07am
Like the portrayal of the mutual desire and yearning. Favourite lines:
"to you I am not prohibited"
"I want your body to be my pillow"
"to you I am not prohibited"
"I want your body to be my pillow"
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re: Re: My Scent
29th Apr 2013 1:35pm
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29th Apr 2013 7:07pm
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29th Apr 2013 7:11pm
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29th Apr 2013 8:10pm
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re: Re: My Scent
29th Apr 2013 8:22pm
Hahahaha Got to love ya my bewitching sis, thank you for stopping big huggs!
Red
Red
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7th May 2013 3:04pm