When life stops giving.

Thank you :)

Vundabar!

I especially like the first stanza
"Tapestries of moss gather up their forces;  
furled curls of jade latch onto soil,  
bones gazing up from underneath"

gives a vivid image! Please continue to write more :)
~Darbadillo xox

Thank you! :D

YES!!
Wonderful Imagery!!

Thank you, jemac :)

Thank you, Mourganna :)

You've hit the nail on the head,
once, twice, thrice.

That's exactly what I meant to
put across.

Thank you, Miss_Sub.

Thank you, Crim. Your comments are kind :)

Ah, another treasure from our Scribbler. Listed.

Stunning, just the right blend of darkness and wistfulness.

Thank you, Atakti :)

SHit!Im in awe!
Don't know what to say to descibe such a Masterpiece! Reading list!
PROFOUND! :)

Thank you! *Blushes*

Thank you, Mr Vortex :)

Geez Scribbler, You always awe me, others said it, i'll repeat it cuz it true---this is art!!!
You peened as the classics but in YOUR voice and bending of life!!! it is a Masterpiece!!!
are memories lost, or pushed away?
unattainable? things are so grey with these things
Death is never easy and at times I kill things off without enough reason, save only the passion of the moment...then I regret and pay hell trying resuscitation...many graveyards litter, real and figurative...I try to re-mold as many figurative ones as I possibly can...for life enjoyment and living by the "right and wrong" code....this was a thinker:) kudos!!!  

Thank you, Soul. Insightful comment :)

Thank you, Scat :)

Thank you, Kasupuu :)

This is a really curious piece.
I could see "death" clearly,
sighing. You make me think Scribbler :)

Nice one.

I'm glad I make you think,
thank you kindly :)

Could you get anymore profound? I don't think so mate. GREAT JOB!!!

Thank you, sir :)

Thank you, Carlene! :)

Wow, I have missed this. It beautifully crafted and profound.

Thank you :)

Thankfully, despite our ignorant and conceived attempts to destroy our world, "life continues giving"

But for how long? Thank you for your comment
Soul man :)

I understand where you're coming from,
I've been trying to work on simplicity
but I keep getting sucked into a vortex
of useless words, or 'fillers',  
words used only to fill a space.
I'll keep your feedback  
in mind for my next upload.
 
Thank you for the helpful comment :)

Very potent vibe, that last line was almost chilling.

Thank you, poet :)

Don't call me sir, I'm a writer after all :)

Thank you, poet.  
 
*been writing letters for
4 hours: reflex*

:)

He he, don't sweat it, being a writer could be my job one day, and we wouldn't want them thinking I'm some stifled old man now, would we.

Certainly not, though many refined poets are stifled old men :)

Thank you for your opinion :)