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Love me as I am.
Men fall in love with their eyes
and express love with
a blood increased size.
I want a man who
can fall in love with me
covered in sweat or dirty,
one who will find me attractive
even if my hair is tied up
or a big flaming mess.
Having that, I can give him my all
and show him my absolute best.
You see, I clean up well, very Well,
sure to make him lose his breath
with the vision I create for him, yes for him,
one he would not soon forget.
A woman who feels loved
and most of all desired
blossoms into everything
a man could ever want,
even more than he had ever
dreamed to aspire.
She wants to please him,
versus having to do it out of fear;
insecurities are not All caused
by the lack of self-confidence
they are also born when the person loved
does not express how you make them feel.
A woman wants to know
she is the object of your desires
that she, at a moments notice
can ignite your fire,
make you want to be naughty
whenever she is around.
A woman does not want to feel
like a trophy, to be shown off to others
simply to be admired by peers,
family and friends you wish to impress.
Let your woman know every chance you get
that she is the one who fills your fantasies, lest
never having told her, you live to regret.
Remember if you pridefully do not,
someone else will on his own behest.
and express love with
a blood increased size.
I want a man who
can fall in love with me
covered in sweat or dirty,
one who will find me attractive
even if my hair is tied up
or a big flaming mess.
Having that, I can give him my all
and show him my absolute best.
You see, I clean up well, very Well,
sure to make him lose his breath
with the vision I create for him, yes for him,
one he would not soon forget.
A woman who feels loved
and most of all desired
blossoms into everything
a man could ever want,
even more than he had ever
dreamed to aspire.
She wants to please him,
versus having to do it out of fear;
insecurities are not All caused
by the lack of self-confidence
they are also born when the person loved
does not express how you make them feel.
A woman wants to know
she is the object of your desires
that she, at a moments notice
can ignite your fire,
make you want to be naughty
whenever she is around.
A woman does not want to feel
like a trophy, to be shown off to others
simply to be admired by peers,
family and friends you wish to impress.
Let your woman know every chance you get
that she is the one who fills your fantasies, lest
never having told her, you live to regret.
Remember if you pridefully do not,
someone else will on his own behest.
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Anonymous
- Edited 15th Apr 2019 9:40pm
27th Apr 2013 8:10pm
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re: Re: Love me as I am.
27th Apr 2013 8:13pm
Hi there baby girl! So glad to see you stopped by, thank you so much bigg huggs!
Red
Red
Anonymous
- Edited 14th Nov 2018 6:35pm
27th Apr 2013 8:39pm
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27th Apr 2013 9:17pm
Thank you my sister So happy you approve of this maybe the boys won't burn my at the stake for it! lolol
Red :-)
Red :-)
Re: Love me as I am.
27th Apr 2013 8:54pm
So true the words You ink, skillfully, I will add!!!
Perfect Art You always are Red!!!
Excellence!!!
Perfect Art You always are Red!!!
Excellence!!!
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re: Re: Love me as I am.
27th Apr 2013 9:21pm
I bow humbly to such high praise, thank you for your generosity and lovely comment. :-)
Red
Red
Anonymous
- Edited 14th May 2018 10:07pm
27th Apr 2013 9:19pm
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27th Apr 2013 9:22pm
Re: Love me as I am.
27th Apr 2013 10:06pm
Educative. And the style is easy, like a conversation.
And I am certain, after this, I can treat my woman better. I have picked something requisite there.
Nice work, my dear Red.
And I am certain, after this, I can treat my woman better. I have picked something requisite there.
Nice work, my dear Red.
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Then my friend I've done a good service,thank you for reading my work. :-)
Red
Red
Re: Love me as I am.
27th Apr 2013 11:52pm
One should always be loved for what they are and not how they look like or what they can offer.
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27th Apr 2013 11:55pm
Re: Love me as I am.
27th Apr 2013 11:57pm
Your artistic imagery both in words and in pictures blends so well as if sucking the air out of my breath. You never cease to amaze me!
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re: Re: Love me as I am.
28th Apr 2013 00:13am
Well friend allow me to give you back the breath life with gentle thank you. :-)
Red
Red
Re: Love me as I am.
28th Apr 2013 1:52am
Red...It seems I'm always late to the party, but as everyone else has said.... you have put a stamp on what every woman knows and every girl should be told.... Excellent my Sis.
Much love
G
Much love
G
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G my sweet better late than never! Lol The important thing is you're here and gracing me with your lovely comment, thank you.
Peace,love and light my sister
Red :-)
Peace,love and light my sister
Red :-)
Re: Love me as I am.
28th Apr 2013 5:28am
Fantastic piece & meaningful message... Your presentation was superb... Thoroughly enjoyed Red! ;-)
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28th Apr 2013 12:54pm
Thank you D!I am thrill you enjoyed it in its entirety, I try to go extra step to enrich the experience for my readers.:-)
Red
Red
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Anonymous
- Edited 28th Apr 2013 10:03pm
28th Apr 2013 10:02pm
Love me as I am, or watch me as I go!
This was the epitome of what loving a person should embody!:)
I love the entire poem but was truly nodding my head in approval, (personally) for:
" A woman who feels loved
and most of all desired
blossoms into everything
a man could ever want,
even more than he had ever
dreamed to aspire."
This was the epitome of what loving a person should embody!:)
I love the entire poem but was truly nodding my head in approval, (personally) for:
" A woman who feels loved
and most of all desired
blossoms into everything
a man could ever want,
even more than he had ever
dreamed to aspire."
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We women recognize the truth in words especially when we have lived them. Thank you Rain for your generous comment.
Red
Red
Anonymous
- Edited 16th May 2018 10:05pm
29th Apr 2013 7:38pm
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re: Re: Love me as I am.
29th Apr 2013 7:50pm
Your late to the party but I saved you some chips ol boy! lol Thanks for stopping by!
Red
Red