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Passions Tamed
They say that “patience is passion tamed.”
And what if I do not
wish to be patient,
to have my passions
leashed or tamed?
I want to be myself,
loose my mane
and not be
judged or condemned.
Allow my passion
to have free reign,
to love fiercely
without shame or guilt.
Ah but polite society
has no room for my ilk,
it frowns upon women
who live this way.
We are given such
disparaging names,
licentious, lurid,
crude and brothel mavens.
It is no wonder
women’s passions feel stifled;
why we become
unfaithful, prudish
or view another woman
jealously as a rival.
I refuse to feel
inhibited and insecure
because wild abandon
must be restrained;
instead be my secret self, fiery,
wild and defiant
not mild or meek
but fierce, rough
not always delicate and sweet.
It would be like
unleashing an act nature,
once loosed there will be
no containing it later.
You must let it run its course,
die of its own accord
and when it settles down,
enjoy the after math and glow
till the next round.
Gypsy Red
And what if I do not
wish to be patient,
to have my passions
leashed or tamed?
I want to be myself,
loose my mane
and not be
judged or condemned.
Allow my passion
to have free reign,
to love fiercely
without shame or guilt.
Ah but polite society
has no room for my ilk,
it frowns upon women
who live this way.
We are given such
disparaging names,
licentious, lurid,
crude and brothel mavens.
It is no wonder
women’s passions feel stifled;
why we become
unfaithful, prudish
or view another woman
jealously as a rival.
I refuse to feel
inhibited and insecure
because wild abandon
must be restrained;
instead be my secret self, fiery,
wild and defiant
not mild or meek
but fierce, rough
not always delicate and sweet.
It would be like
unleashing an act nature,
once loosed there will be
no containing it later.
You must let it run its course,
die of its own accord
and when it settles down,
enjoy the after math and glow
till the next round.
Gypsy Red
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Re: Passions Tamed
25th Apr 2013 4:38pm
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25th Apr 2013 5:43pm
lol Soul, careful or you will fall under the Gypsy's spell hahaha Thanks for the great comment, you're very kind.
Red
Red
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25th Apr 2013 6:16pm
Re: Passions Tamed
25th Apr 2013 10:26pm
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25th Apr 2013 10:50pm
And yet they have Grace. As long as I can remember I have felt like a wild thing chained or constricted by my people/family's so called moral standard (which was set in a stone age patriarchy)ugh...Thank you dearest.:-)
Red
Red
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26th Apr 2013 1:32am
Thats always the case in traditional society, Red. Born Catholic here, so know that so much. Hugs!!
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26th Apr 2013 1:58am
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re: Re: Passions Tamed
26th Apr 2013 2:37pm
Hahah Let it burn baby! Thanks for stopping by to read, I appreciate the great comment!
Red
Red
Re: Passions Tamed
26th Apr 2013 4:02am
In framing this as a poem about "self" you give voice to obstacles that other women throughout history have faced. Easy to focus on carnal desires but I think it can be extended even further.
A smashing write from a person with a beautiful spirit.
A smashing write from a person with a beautiful spirit.
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26th Apr 2013 2:40pm
Jazzy you are always so perceptive. Yes it is in the broad spectrum about much more than sexuality, it is about women's nature and how we as a society try to squeeze a women into a mold that she may not want to be in.Thanks for stopping by.
Red
Red
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26th Apr 2013 4:28pm
Not really, just thinking about my brother's father. Luckily mom got it right the second time around.
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26th Apr 2013 4:54pm
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26th Apr 2013 2:42pm
Your just naughty Gabriel! Ohh how I love to say your name, it rolls of the tongue in such a lovely way, maybe because I say it in Spanish Gabrrrieeel! lol
Red
Red
Re: Passions Tamed
26th Apr 2013 6:59pm
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26th Apr 2013 7:04pm
Thank you Marcus, Glad you stopped by always a pleasure to read your comments.
Red
Red