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Je t'aime d'un amour brisé aujourd'hui
Sitting here with this knife
Thinking of the past
Every laugh every smile
Is like a stab in the chest
With a tear down my face
A inch slips away
I wanna bury this knife deep
End all this pain
All the Joy and Cheer
I wanted to feel
On the day of my birth
Was diminished when I saw her name
Saw the messages on her wall
Smashed my world and broke it all
With every word you told her
Broke me past the point of no return
Invested my time
In your fake heart
To hear words
I now know were never true
So now I say with this
I take this knife and plunge it deep
Lose it all
Yet be set free with no more pain
Thinking of the past
Every laugh every smile
Is like a stab in the chest
With a tear down my face
A inch slips away
I wanna bury this knife deep
End all this pain
All the Joy and Cheer
I wanted to feel
On the day of my birth
Was diminished when I saw her name
Saw the messages on her wall
Smashed my world and broke it all
With every word you told her
Broke me past the point of no return
Invested my time
In your fake heart
To hear words
I now know were never true
So now I say with this
I take this knife and plunge it deep
Lose it all
Yet be set free with no more pain
Published 22nd Apr 2013
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22nd Apr 2013 8:25pm
22nd Apr 2013 9:48pm
23rd Apr 2013 4:54am
I saw the title and was like "oh crap, i am not going to be able to read this" and got sad. Then i clicked and saw it was english and got happy. Then i read it and got sad again. It is haunting and beautifully painful.
"Invested my time/ In your fake heart" this gave me the shivers, it is perfect. Perfect.
But what does the title mean? ._.
"Invested my time/ In your fake heart" this gave me the shivers, it is perfect. Perfect.
But what does the title mean? ._.
23rd Apr 2013 5:27am
23rd Apr 2013 5:30am
I still can't believe he put you through all that. Amazing write though. I hope it helped you get some emotions out. That last stanza is really good. great work
23rd Apr 2013 7:36pm
3rd May 2013 4:48am
Using ur skills wisely tori~chan I like reading ur poems cuz I feel like ur here with me plus u always show me them I got hooked on it I love u tori ur my best friend
3rd May 2013 5:47am
You are my best friend too I love you Ale I hope to see your writing soon I can recommend some good reads to since I have made so many good friends on here and one other best friend as well.
8th May 2013 3:57am
i have admiration for anyone that knows french! keep up the work on that! it'll give you less of a chance to learn english, but it's FRENCH! the french are the kings of art and lit in the early half of the last century! read baudelaire! he's more late 1800's. the cat is just about my favorite poem ever. he was poe's translator. check out the surrealists too, like andre brenton! highly inspiring.
8th May 2013 5:41am
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1st Jul 2013 2:01pm
It's a shame the people I lose to their own delimias. Maybe 2 years ago if I never let myself be accused of so many things for others then maybe I would know or have been put through the stuff I've been through. I consider it a good thing now that I was broken so much cause now people can't push me around. Thank you for reading, feed back was appreciated.