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Good Morning to Me
Sat up on the side of my bed
Thought about tasks that lied ahead
Wished my bed had been my grave
"Good Morning" to me
© 2013 The Refined Poet. All rights reserved.
Thought about tasks that lied ahead
Wished my bed had been my grave
"Good Morning" to me
© 2013 The Refined Poet. All rights reserved.
Written by
therefinedpoet
(The Refined Poet)
Published 18th Apr 2013
| Edited 25th May 2013
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re: Re: Good Morning to Me
23rd Apr 2013 8:17pm
Re: Good Morning to Me
19th Apr 2013 5:21pm
re: Re: Good Morning to Me
23rd Apr 2013 8:17pm
Re: Good Morning to Me
Anonymous
23rd Apr 2013 6:11am
Love your voice with the ink! Had a bluesy vibe!:)
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re: Re: Good Morning to Me
23rd Apr 2013 8:17pm
Re: Good Morning to Me
6th May 2013 9:31pm
I like this, especially the
sarcastic, sardonic, tone.
I also like the hat.
sarcastic, sardonic, tone.
I also like the hat.
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re: Re: Good Morning to Me
27th Jul 2013 5:57pm
Re: Good Morning to Me
10th May 2013 4:14pm
Hello Refined,
Nice one...short and sweet. I like the visual effect dissolving the reversed views. The lighting has a good effect also. You should expand this to something bigger....
Nice one...short and sweet. I like the visual effect dissolving the reversed views. The lighting has a good effect also. You should expand this to something bigger....
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re: Re: Good Morning to Me
27th Jul 2013 5:58pm
Thanks so much! I have considered expanding it, so we will see how it goes.
~TRP~
~TRP~
Re: Good Morning to Me
24th Jun 2013 6:00pm
nice....short, sweet, and good video work....worked hard like a part time job!!...lol
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re: Re: Good Morning to Me
27th Jul 2013 5:59pm
Re: Good Morning to Me
4th Dec 2013 6:54pm
It's a little short, but the thought is very recognizable.
Maybe just a thumbs up just for that.
Maybe just a thumbs up just for that.
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re: Re: Good Morning to Me
7th Dec 2013 3:37am