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It Seems
Tired of pursuing hopes and dreams
They only come with many
disappointments
It seems...
Wearied with chasing ultimate success
It only comes to those
who couldn't care less
It seems...
Angered by life and its woes
Windows never open
when the doors close
It seems...
A moment with pity leads to inner death
Destroying patience and perseverance
till a man's dying breath
Nothing ever comes of complaining
Address the negative feelings
purging them through explaining
The only way to achieve, and time redeem
Release disappointments, continue to pursue
hopes and dreams
It seems....
© 2012 The Refined Poet. All rights reserved.
They only come with many
disappointments
It seems...
Wearied with chasing ultimate success
It only comes to those
who couldn't care less
It seems...
Angered by life and its woes
Windows never open
when the doors close
It seems...
A moment with pity leads to inner death
Destroying patience and perseverance
till a man's dying breath
Nothing ever comes of complaining
Address the negative feelings
purging them through explaining
The only way to achieve, and time redeem
Release disappointments, continue to pursue
hopes and dreams
It seems....
© 2012 The Refined Poet. All rights reserved.
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Re: It Seems
19th Apr 2013 00:06am
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23rd Apr 2013 8:14pm
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19th Apr 2013 11:28am
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Anonymous
23rd Apr 2013 6:16am
Some favorite lines "Nothing ever comes of complaining
Address the negative feelings
purging them through explaining"
AND
"The only way to achieve, and time redeem
Release disappointments, continue to pursue
hopes and dreams
It seems...."
PROFOUND INK!:)
Address the negative feelings
purging them through explaining"
AND
"The only way to achieve, and time redeem
Release disappointments, continue to pursue
hopes and dreams
It seems...."
PROFOUND INK!:)
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Re: It Seems
4th Dec 2013 6:59pm
I'm not going to drop a witty comment.
But I am going to thank you.
You might just have inspired me, to push on another day. (or more :D)
But I am going to thank you.
You might just have inspired me, to push on another day. (or more :D)
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