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Painting a Masterpiece
Tonight,
My baby so sweet and so fine
On you I paint my best design
Using a precise stroke
and a thick bristled brush
No mood to hurry so I'm not gonna rush
Outlining your body first is how I begin
Starting with the black paint..ooohh
That's hot! your mind starts thinking
Now,comes the colors,
as thoughts dance inside your head
I'm brushing across your breasts,
as aerolas' I paint it red
Next, then come the nipples
I choose to paint them blue
They become erect, as I suspect
Passion's starting to build in you
All over your frame, I've left my name
It's my dandiest work of art
Looking like a candy colored rain,
and now comes the best part..
Dropping to my knees, I aim to please
teeth chew the panties off
I work the tongue ass to front,
and inside where's it's sweet, hot, and soft
Spend an hour, recieve your shower
Now beg for the meat that makes you scream
I pump you long, and pump you hard,
and finally fill you full of cream...
My baby so sweet and so fine
On you I paint my best design
Using a precise stroke
and a thick bristled brush
No mood to hurry so I'm not gonna rush
Outlining your body first is how I begin
Starting with the black paint..ooohh
That's hot! your mind starts thinking
Now,comes the colors,
as thoughts dance inside your head
I'm brushing across your breasts,
as aerolas' I paint it red
Next, then come the nipples
I choose to paint them blue
They become erect, as I suspect
Passion's starting to build in you
All over your frame, I've left my name
It's my dandiest work of art
Looking like a candy colored rain,
and now comes the best part..
Dropping to my knees, I aim to please
teeth chew the panties off
I work the tongue ass to front,
and inside where's it's sweet, hot, and soft
Spend an hour, recieve your shower
Now beg for the meat that makes you scream
I pump you long, and pump you hard,
and finally fill you full of cream...
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Anonymous
- Edited 14th Nov 2018 6:35pm
17th Apr 2013 6:36pm
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re: Re: Perfect, encased in a dream
17th Apr 2013 8:11pm
Thank u my friend, I actually have a video of me reading this but it wouldn't upload to here! :( lol glad u liked it n appreciate it n you :)
Anonymous
- Edited 15th May 2018 00:09am
17th Apr 2013 8:00pm
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re: Re: Perfect, encased in a dream
18th Apr 2013 4:25am
Thank you so much poetess, I'm flattered n humbled by your words, appreciate it as well :)
Anonymous
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18th Apr 2013 00:49am
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re: Re: Perfect, encased in a dream
18th Apr 2013 4:24am
Thank you, coming from a poetic beauty who should
know, that's a high honor! :) appreciate ya lady ;)
know, that's a high honor! :) appreciate ya lady ;)
Re: Perfect, encased in a dream
Anonymous
18th Apr 2013 9:22pm
No words needed! Reading list should say plenty!
AMAZING INK!
AMAZING INK!
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Re: Perfect, encased in a dream
18th Apr 2013 10:48pm
Aaaawwww.... U gave me a huge smile that a sledgehammer couldn't wipe off my face! lol
Thank u, I'm indebted. I promise I will repay too :)
Thank u, I'm indebted. I promise I will repay too :)
Re: Perfect, encased in a dream
19th Apr 2013 3:36am
Re: Perfect, encased in a dream
19th Apr 2013 3:45am
Thanks a ton bro! But truly I think all your ink is Classic... So being mentioned in the same category as u I'm deeply honored! peace n love to u n urs bro!
Re: Painting a Masterpiece
19th Apr 2013 5:25pm
re: Re: Painting a Masterpiece
20th Apr 2013 5:29am
Wow what very nice bing to say! Thank you so much, I truly appreciate that n I will be returning the favor soon :)
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19th Apr 2013 5:28pm
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20th Apr 2013 5:30am
Re: Painting a Masterpiece
19th Apr 2013 8:24pm
O' my ...Wut do I say 2 dis here :)... Very sensual masterpiece u've created sweets! Def dig'n da vibe of da ink drip on dis Hot*Hot*Hott*:)....Bossy...
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re: Re: Painting a Masterpiece
20th Apr 2013 5:32am
Aaawwww listen to the Hottest giving me shine :) thank u sweetness, truly grateful for all that is you! :)
Re: Painting a Masterpiece
20th Apr 2013 4:27pm
Spend an hour, receive your shower
Now beg for the meat that makes you scream
I pump you long, and pump you hard,
and finally fill you full of cream...sexily HOT LINES
Now beg for the meat that makes you scream
I pump you long, and pump you hard,
and finally fill you full of cream...sexily HOT LINES
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re: Re: Painting a Masterpiece
20th Apr 2013 4:54pm
Aaaawww well, that's a big compliment coming from a woman who clearly knows HOT lol ur sweet, I appreciate ur comment n time :)
Anonymous
- Edited 15th May 2018 7:56pm
23rd Apr 2013 5:21am
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Re: Painting a Masterpiece
23rd Apr 2013 5:23am
Aaaawww lol thank u! What a very sweet comment, I'm flattered n truly humbled by ur praise . :)
Anonymous
- Edited 16th May 2018 11:39am
6th May 2013 6:14am
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6th May 2013 6:37am
Re: Painting a Masterpiece
6th Jun 2013 4:37am
You trying to kill me...your spoken word along with your word was HOTTTTTT!!!!!
Nice ink on this...wow!
Nice ink on this...wow!
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re: Re: Painting a Masterpiece
6th Jun 2013 4:42am
Lol aaawww baby... Muah!!! That was very sweet of you to say! I'm very flattered, thank u so much! :)
Re: Painting a Masterpiece
12th Jun 2013 4:36pm
An ooohhh gawsh moment. Loved this write. Had trouble hearing once the words of the tune kicked in but I re-read to ensure i missed not a drop of ink. Lovely Tyvm syn
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12th Jun 2013 4:53pm
Re: Painting a Masterpiece
3rd Jul 2013 3:13pm
To read this and simultaneously hear your voice articulating the the erotic lines is an intense experience. Thanks for that, it's great!
Chi
Chi
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re: Re: Painting a Masterpiece
3rd Jul 2013 3:21pm
Aaaawwww thank you!! I shall treasure this comment!
I love it so much, ur soooo sweet :)
I love it so much, ur soooo sweet :)
Re: Painting a Masterpiece
4th Jul 2013 2:56am
Wowza! That's the first word that comes to my mind upon reading such a finely written - and spoken - piece of work such as this one. I've never heard your voice before this, so it was quite a treat to have both the words and the feel of the words coming through with your passion and feel.
I very much so enjoyed reading this poem. I got some chills, that's for sure... pleasurable chills, at that. :D
I very much so enjoyed reading this poem. I got some chills, that's for sure... pleasurable chills, at that. :D
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4th Jul 2013 3:08am
Lol aaaawww thank u my sweetness I'm flattered
By ur words n appreciate them much :)
By ur words n appreciate them much :)
Anonymous
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6th Jul 2013 4:16am
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6th Jul 2013 11:41am
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10th Jul 2013 3:46pm
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Re: Painting a Masterpiece
5th Dec 2013 5:52am
this is how you make love...with words, thank you for sharing this poetikmind!
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re: Re: Painting a Masterpiece
5th Dec 2013 12:40pm
Aaaaawwwww thank you! You're so sweet to say that... Appreciate you so much :)
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- Edited 15th Apr 2019 9:40pm
10th Dec 2013 11:18pm
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re: Re: Painting a Masterpiece
10th Dec 2013 11:55pm
Aaaawwww lol too sweet of u to say my sweetie :) thanks a ton for your support always! :)
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11th Dec 2013 4:24am
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11th Dec 2013 4:32am
Re: Painting a Masterpiece
9th Feb 2014 12:15pm
Wipes sweat off ... I love this ... Lology ... Outerr words so to speak..
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re: Re: Painting a Masterpiece
9th Feb 2014 1:12pm
Aaaaawwwww precious...thank you my dear
happy to hear you enjoyed n truly appreciate your
support muah! :)
happy to hear you enjoyed n truly appreciate your
support muah! :)
Re: Painting a Masterpiece
16th Jul 2014 2:25pm
I had to check out some of your older work to se your progression. You had mad skills straight out of the gate. This is clever as it temps the sensual mind of the artist in us.
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re: Re: Painting a Masterpiece
16th Jul 2014 2:43pm
Well I'm pleased to see someone venture back into my archives, because truth to tell I felt I was more
inspired then than I am now, because LIFE frankly
just keeps getting in the way! lol appreciate you much dude... :)
inspired then than I am now, because LIFE frankly
just keeps getting in the way! lol appreciate you much dude... :)