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I walk to the edge
I took a leap of fate
I sliped and missed the ledge
Now i dangle off the ledge
I lost all my faith and sliped again
Now i fall full of disgrace
I looked up and seen your face
I start to cry
I screamed im so sorry
Then hit the bottom and it hurt like hell
I get back up and turn around
I see a sign "Welcome to Hell"
I took a leap of fate
I sliped and missed the ledge
Now i dangle off the ledge
I lost all my faith and sliped again
Now i fall full of disgrace
I looked up and seen your face
I start to cry
I screamed im so sorry
Then hit the bottom and it hurt like hell
I get back up and turn around
I see a sign "Welcome to Hell"
Published 16th Apr 2013
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16th Apr 2013 7:39pm
I liked the content, simple but to the point. Expand the vocabulary and try using a thesaurus. All poetry is good because it comes from each individual, great poetry is the ability to draw someone in your mind!
