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Silly can be a positive thing
So, folks tend to criticize
The validity of silly lil things
But just think of it...
the happy it can bring...
Those with their
Petty lil pet peeves
Many people... harbor in reality
Sadness, heavy on the heart
Major the weight, a life depart...
So why shouldn't we accept
the lightness of silly lil things?
When there's the potential
of the happy it can bring...
The validity of silly lil things
But just think of it...
the happy it can bring...
Those with their
Petty lil pet peeves
Many people... harbor in reality
Sadness, heavy on the heart
Major the weight, a life depart...
So why shouldn't we accept
the lightness of silly lil things?
When there's the potential
of the happy it can bring...
Published 15th Apr 2013
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11th Aug 2013 4:57am
Awesome sentiment in this poem, Rich. I thoroughly enjoyed what it brought to me - the simplicity and easy to comprehend part being what tied it all together so nicely.
I will definitely continue to be a fan of yours if you continue to write poetry like this, and the of the many other styles in which you seem to be so fluent and verbal. :D
I will definitely continue to be a fan of yours if you continue to write poetry like this, and the of the many other styles in which you seem to be so fluent and verbal. :D
11th Aug 2013 5:00am