Submissions by GothicQueen666 (Jaimee-Leigh)
POEMS AND SHORT STORIES
Poet Introduction
I love writing. Everything I write is something I have experienced or someone close to me has experienced. Thanks for reading my poems. I'm looking forward to your tips and critique!
FICTIONAL PROSE
Published
5th Sep 2014 1:07am
5th Sep 2014 1:07am
Kiisha Marie (Test Story Pt. 1)
((A/N: This is simply the first two paragraphs of a story I am beginning to write. Please be honest with your comments. Let me know if there is anything I should change.))
The young wolf smiled lightly as she padded into the Lunar Cycle Wolf Den. This was her home, from the delicious, coppery scent of freshly killed venison to the thick, light brown, short furred bear pelts stacked in the storage room. She shook her body, her grey and burgundy fur threw water droplets across the entrance from the pouring rain outside. In a quick movement her bones broke, then slithered like snakes...
The young wolf smiled lightly as she padded into the Lunar Cycle Wolf Den. This was her home, from the delicious, coppery scent of freshly killed venison to the thick, light brown, short furred bear pelts stacked in the storage room. She shook her body, her grey and burgundy fur threw water droplets across the entrance from the pouring rain outside. In a quick movement her bones broke, then slithered like snakes...
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LOVE POEM
Published
22nd Aug 2014 3:08am
22nd Aug 2014 3:08am
Goodbye My Dear
I see that smile
You offer me today
As though you know
That I'm not okay
You see the pain
Written on my face
As you compare me
To our broken vase
My dearest baby girl
I love you so
I'm truly sorry but
It's time to go
We spent the years
Of amazing joy together
But my wonderful daughter
I'm leaving you forever
You offer me today
As though you know
That I'm not okay
You see the pain
Written on my face
As you compare me
To our broken vase
My dearest baby girl
I love you so
I'm truly sorry but
It's time to go
We spent the years
Of amazing joy together
But my wonderful daughter
I'm leaving you forever
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MISCELLANEOUS POEM
Published
18th Aug 2014 4:04am
18th Aug 2014 4:04am
Today
Today I noticed
Something new about
This wonderful world
What is it?
That not everything
Is going to be
Precious forever
Today I discovered
That I am
Alone and dying
No one cares
About what's happening
To my diminishing, bleeding,
Stupid, heart.
Today I realized
That being outcasted
Isn't always bad
It teaches you
Things you wouldn't
Have noticed with others
Life's beauty..
Something new about
This wonderful world
What is it?
That not everything
Is going to be
Precious forever
Today I discovered
That I am
Alone and dying
No one cares
About what's happening
To my diminishing, bleeding,
Stupid, heart.
Today I realized
That being outcasted
Isn't always bad
It teaches you
Things you wouldn't
Have noticed with others
Life's beauty..
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DARK POEM
Published
17th Aug 2014 3:58am
17th Aug 2014 3:58am
Untitled
I thought I cared
What you always thought
Before I realized that
I don't need you
Or your fucking shit.
I believed you mattered
Now I'm sitting here
Happy that the pain
Depression, anger and more
Is all over with
I feel so light
Euphoria sets in easily
As this knife kills
My so called soul,
We are done here.
What you always thought
Before I realized that
I don't need you
Or your fucking shit.
I believed you mattered
Now I'm sitting here
Happy that the pain
Depression, anger and more
Is all over with
I feel so light
Euphoria sets in easily
As this knife kills
My so called soul,
We are done here.
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STORY POEM
Published
24th Jul 2014 11:14pm
24th Jul 2014 11:14pm
This Living Monster
Its in me,
Living and eating
Taking my life,
Stealing my freedom
A hospital visit
A simple pain
Below my breast
Becoming my enemy
I have Cancer
But its worse
As you see
Its called the
Monster inside me
**Sorry its so short, will revise later
Living and eating
Taking my life,
Stealing my freedom
A hospital visit
A simple pain
Below my breast
Becoming my enemy
I have Cancer
But its worse
As you see
Its called the
Monster inside me
**Sorry its so short, will revise later
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DARK POEM
Published
1st Jul 2014 4:50am
1st Jul 2014 4:50am
I Grab My Blade
I grab my blade
And stare at it blankly
Gripping it tightly
Between my thumb
And index finger
SLASH
I don't feel my wrist
Slice open on impact
Instead I simply smile
And repeat the movement
Until my skin is painted red
drip, drip, drip
I look down
At the canvas
Called my arm
I'm happy now
I'm free at last
And stare at it blankly
Gripping it tightly
Between my thumb
And index finger
SLASH
I don't feel my wrist
Slice open on impact
Instead I simply smile
And repeat the movement
Until my skin is painted red
drip, drip, drip
I look down
At the canvas
Called my arm
I'm happy now
I'm free at last
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FICTIONAL PROSE
Published
20th Jun 2014 1:30am
20th Jun 2014 1:30am
The Kidnappee Diary-- Chapter Eight
7 Months Later~
“Wow Vi, we have made a huge break-through this week.” My psychologist says as she turns off her recorder. “I am very proud of you.”
“Thanks” I sigh as I look at the ground in front of me. How could I have forgotten that happened. Is that why Nate hasn’t been around? I place my hand on my belly.
“What are you thinking?” She asks looking at me curiously.
“Why couldn’t I remember any of this?”
“Our minds block out certain memories until we are able to handle them.” We sit in silence for a moment before she speaks again, “So how are you...
“Wow Vi, we have made a huge break-through this week.” My psychologist says as she turns off her recorder. “I am very proud of you.”
“Thanks” I sigh as I look at the ground in front of me. How could I have forgotten that happened. Is that why Nate hasn’t been around? I place my hand on my belly.
“What are you thinking?” She asks looking at me curiously.
“Why couldn’t I remember any of this?”
“Our minds block out certain memories until we are able to handle them.” We sit in silence for a moment before she speaks again, “So how are you...
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FICTIONAL PROSE
Published
20th Jun 2014 1:24am
20th Jun 2014 1:24am
The Kidnappee Diary-- Chapter Seven
I wake up in a place that is all too familiar, the sterile smell, the undertone of sadness, the quiet beeping. Why am I here? I’m not sick, or at least I don’t feel sick. I look around slowly and notice the get well cards on the table at the foot of the bed. Why am I here? I can’t remember anything.
“Vi! Oh em Gee! Your awake!” Scarlet yells as she jumps into the bed with me and squeezes me as tight as she can. “How are you feeling?”
“Can’t. Breathe.” I state between unhelpful gasps of air.
“Oopsie, sorry sissy.” she says as she lets go of me. “I’m going to go fetch...
“Vi! Oh em Gee! Your awake!” Scarlet yells as she jumps into the bed with me and squeezes me as tight as she can. “How are you feeling?”
“Can’t. Breathe.” I state between unhelpful gasps of air.
“Oopsie, sorry sissy.” she says as she lets go of me. “I’m going to go fetch...
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FICTIONAL PROSE
Published
11th Jun 2014 7:09pm
11th Jun 2014 7:09pm
The Kidnappee Diary-- Chapter Six
I lay on the ground crying, my clothes scattered randomly around the room. How could he do that to me? He is dating my sister for crying out loud.
“Vi?” I hear Nate ask. “Vi, what the heck happened in here?” I don’t respond, instead I curl up tighter and hope that Nate goes away. “Vi, talk to me. Please tell me what happened. I can’t help you if you don’t tell me.”
“He hurt me” I mumble as I begin to sob more. “Go away. I feel dirty enough as it is.” When he leaves the room I hear shouting so I cover my ears. After a few minutes I get up slowly and grab my clothes, putting them...
“Vi?” I hear Nate ask. “Vi, what the heck happened in here?” I don’t respond, instead I curl up tighter and hope that Nate goes away. “Vi, talk to me. Please tell me what happened. I can’t help you if you don’t tell me.”
“He hurt me” I mumble as I begin to sob more. “Go away. I feel dirty enough as it is.” When he leaves the room I hear shouting so I cover my ears. After a few minutes I get up slowly and grab my clothes, putting them...
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FICTIONAL PROSE
Published
11th Jun 2014 7:05pm
11th Jun 2014 7:05pm
The Kidnappee Diary-- Chapter Five
A few minutes later I hear chains scraping along the ground towards the room. "Do we have to do this? She is going to end up getting free and you know it!" A muffled voice whispers as the chains are dropped on the ground.
"I want her to have some freedom, Josiah. Otherwise she will hate me even more. Remember this is to get her to date me again."
"I don't care if you’re trying to make her the Queen of England! She is going to get free and she is going to get us thrown in jail. Trust me you don't want that, Nate. Jail is not a nice place."
...
"I want her to have some freedom, Josiah. Otherwise she will hate me even more. Remember this is to get her to date me again."
"I don't care if you’re trying to make her the Queen of England! She is going to get free and she is going to get us thrown in jail. Trust me you don't want that, Nate. Jail is not a nice place."
...
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FICTIONAL PROSE
Published
9th Jun 2014 2:13am
9th Jun 2014 2:13am
The Kidnappee Diary-- Chapter Four
"Boss she's awake" Someone whispers from the other side of the room. I jump slightly, suddenly realizing I am handcuffed.
"H-Hello" I stutter in a shaky voice "I-is anyone there?" All I hear in response is the pitter patter of a drippy faucet.
"Hello, is anyone there?" I ask again, this time in a much calmer voice.
"Oh, yes we are here" Someone states nonchalantly as I hear the unscrewing of a light bulb. "We have been here the whole time"
"Whole time?" I ask beginning to freak out "How long...
"H-Hello" I stutter in a shaky voice "I-is anyone there?" All I hear in response is the pitter patter of a drippy faucet.
"Hello, is anyone there?" I ask again, this time in a much calmer voice.
"Oh, yes we are here" Someone states nonchalantly as I hear the unscrewing of a light bulb. "We have been here the whole time"
"Whole time?" I ask beginning to freak out "How long...
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FICTIONAL PROSE
Published
9th Jun 2014 2:10am
9th Jun 2014 2:10am
The Kidnappee Diary-- ChapterThree
I arrive to the party a few minutes late, but it doesn't seem as though anyone is there. I pull my phone out of my pocket and dial Luke's number.
"Hey beautiful, how are you?" He answers almost immediately.
"I'm okay, where are you?"
"Oh, yeah, I meant to call you earlier but I can't make it. I'm sorry baby girl"
"Its okay, I was just really hoping that I didn't have to be here alone." I whine softly.
"Well hey, I gotta go but call me when you get home alright?"
"Kay, talk to you later" I say...
"Hey beautiful, how are you?" He answers almost immediately.
"I'm okay, where are you?"
"Oh, yeah, I meant to call you earlier but I can't make it. I'm sorry baby girl"
"Its okay, I was just really hoping that I didn't have to be here alone." I whine softly.
"Well hey, I gotta go but call me when you get home alright?"
"Kay, talk to you later" I say...
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