Poetry competition CLOSED 16th August 2014 12:00pm
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LobodeSanPedro
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ACROSTIC-TANKA

Posted: 4th August 2014 10:07pm
Edited: 5th August 2014 6:55am - edited 2 times
LobodeSanPedro
LobodeSanPedro
Dangerous Mind
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Bare knuckle brawler
Olympic glory captured  
X enolith of God
Excellence eked out in miles  
Ropes mark courage's limits

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Posted: 5th August 2014 4:32am
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Posted: 6th August 2014 00:49am
Edited: 6th August 2014 00:57am - edited 6 times
snugglebuck
snugglebuck
Thought Provoker
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Forum Posts: 293
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Posted: 6th August 2014 2:45am
Fallen_Angel_194
Fallen_Angel_194
Imperfect
Twisted Dreamer
United States
Joined 24th May 2014
Forum Posts: 47
Decived And Tricked By Death
Eager To Die or atleast say good bye
A Lonely Girl,Tricked Out Of Her Life
The Sweet Silenece
Hell,The Girl Died And Is Still In Her Own Hell

Posted: 6th August 2014 3:50pm
EngrVV
EngrVV
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Dangerous Mind
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Thank you ladies and gentlemen for your entries. Let me remind you that this is strictly 5/7/5/7/7 sylabble count form for a total of 31 sylabbles in 5 lines...otherwise, it would be simply acrostic.

Posted: 6th August 2014 8:56pm
Edited: 7th August 2014 7:56am - edited 18 times
snugglebuck
snugglebuck
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Fortuitous lass
Una, my darling great aunty
Living a century
Daughter of the lone prairie
Abiding happy is she  

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Posted: 7th August 2014 00:41am
Viddax
Viddax
Lord Viddax
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Frozen blood and mind
Endless doom gathers anew,
An oblivion
Ruination awaits you
Salvation becomes hopeless.

Posted: 7th August 2014 2:22am
rainbow_sunshine
rainbow_sunshine
Wendy
Thought Provoker
Canada 2awards
Joined 3rd Dec 2010
Forum Posts: 16
Looming luminescence
Illuminating intricate intensities
Guiding and grasping upwards
Heed the heat indulge the warmth
Testimonies of truth untampered

Posted: 7th August 2014 2:31am
rainbow_sunshine
rainbow_sunshine
Wendy
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Destiny is calling
Revolutionary redemption of hesitation
Enough to elapse all fears
Attainable if
Made the most crucial means of living



Posted: 7th August 2014 2:34am
rainbow_sunshine
rainbow_sunshine
Wendy
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Bears paw brandished on broken earth
Roots coiled underfoot
Owl swoops and caresses tree tops
Warm wood collected to kindle the fire
Nature unfolds the many shades of her skin

Posted: 7th August 2014 2:41am
rainbow_sunshine
rainbow_sunshine
Wendy
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Group dynamics multiplied
Locations spread yet united
Oriented towards a common purpose
Be and let be
Everyone belongs here

Posted: 7th August 2014 2:47am
rainbow_sunshine
rainbow_sunshine
Wendy
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Bold and determined
Everything led to this point
Goals poignant and pondered
Inspiration gathered-
Now is the time

Posted: 7th August 2014 2:53am
rainbow_sunshine
rainbow_sunshine
Wendy
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aww snap...I didn't see the syllable restriction until just now. Is there a way to delete my posts and put new ones?

Posted: 7th August 2014 4:31am
anonymouslyhere
anonymouslyhere
Thedarkshadow
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Lovely the way she stares into my eyes
Obvious the intent
Vicious stare as if she hunts me down
Every moment Stimulating my senses
Rushing amazing thoughts through my mind

Posted: 7th August 2014 11:39am
EngrVV
EngrVV
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rainbow_sunshine said:aww snap...I didn't see the syllable restriction until just now. Is there a way to delete my posts and put new ones?

Wendy, you don't need to delete them...just click edit on the buttom right hand corner of the page where your entries are.

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