Poetry competition CLOSED 2nd March 2014 9:59pm
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blue_angel
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The guessing game (thanks Gemini)

blue_angel
Fire of Insight
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Joined 15th Oct 2013
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with untamed passion
he steps forward
armed with a fiery quill

unable to stand still along the
slippery path of Pisces will
trying to live out fantasies thrill

divided heart of dark
and light, craving the fight
striving for the contrived acceptance

in a twisted dance
of the tongue's acknowledging
angered in misguided circumstance

absorbing freedom's dream
flying along poetry's seam for transcending
while time becomes the bleeding fiend

Pathospassion
Fire of Insight
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Joined 1st Feb 2014
Forum Posts: 147

Forgive me... this competition was not created for selfish reasons but i created it without a thought toward anyone else. Thank you for your entries and creativity!

night-star
Rhiannon
Thought Provoker
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Joined 11th Oct 2013
Forum Posts: 154

Happy early birth day!!!!!!!!!!!!! Hope you enjoy it!!!!!!!!!!!

Pathospassion
Fire of Insight
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night-star said:Happy early birth day!!!!!!!!!!!!! Hope you enjoy it!!!!!!!!!!!

thanks... i will try for you. I have never favored holidays and birthdays for good reason but i will try my best for you.

night-star
Rhiannon
Thought Provoker
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Thank you for trying.

night-star
Rhiannon
Thought Provoker
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Joined 11th Oct 2013
Forum Posts: 154

You are you

You are you
Nothing more
Nothing less
You are not a whore
You are the best
You are you
Always have been
Always will be
Sure youve comitted sin
But then again
Who hasn't?
You are you
Let no one nor nothing
Tell you any different
Plain and simple
You are you


Hope you like my entry! :)

Pathospassion
Fire of Insight
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I do like the flow

night-star
Rhiannon
Thought Provoker
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Forum Posts: 154

Thank you

7th_son
Thought Provoker
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Joined 19th Feb 2014
Forum Posts: 285

you are simply submissive..
for all you long for..
is complete domination..

i would write another haiku to further describe you but that would only show obsession. and feeding those waiting to be bound is simply something i am not here to do.

Elsie
Strange Creature
Joined 16th Feb 2014
Forum Posts: 7

A game,
A guess,
Singing a guess,

Guessed i sung,
A guessing game for you

lanooz
Twisted Dreamer
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Joined 21st July 2012
Forum Posts: 100

I believe that your heart weighs a ton
for your conic ways depict a call for help
but maybe you will veto that notion
and instead laugh at my ignorant taste
but I can't help and notice your omnipresence
stomping the ground in theatrical fashion
underlying your expendable way of thinking
but let me explain, in this planet we are
all the same blight creatures looking for
refuge in an ill-conceived notion of hope.

scratch the paper, you're special in many ways
past mistakes will elevate you past the grave.
In dead heat you climbed out the sandbox a little
dirty, now is time to give in to turning the corner
and never looking back at the boulevard of haste.















blue_angel
Fire of Insight
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Joined 15th Oct 2013
Forum Posts: 75

Standing to graciously accept the award ... Thank you !
and Happy B-Day too ...

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