Poetry competition CLOSED 2nd March 2014 9:59pm
WINNER
blue_angel
blue_angel
RUNNERS-UP:
lanooz
and night-star
The guessing game (thanks Gemini)
Poetry Contest Description
I got this idea from member Gemini but changed it some.
Nobody on DU actually knows me which i know for sure except for what they might see in my poetry so i want you to write a poem of any kind detailing what kind of person i might me. Creativity is important.
This is a guessing game.
You have one month- ends on my birthday.......
This is a guessing game.
You have one month- ends on my birthday.......
Let’s see if I have this right……. You have only been a member for 11 days and you want me to write a poem about you?
I KNOW YOU
Pathos means an appeal to the audience's emotions
I’m guessing you have a small penis
and was picked on in gym class
never really had a girlfriend
probably stared at ya moms ass
comparing it to all the bitches in your dads porn stash
now all the pages are stuck together
you can’t put them back
found your sister sexy
because you both collect ball sacks
I KNOW YOU
Pathos means an appeal to the audience's emotions
I’m guessing you have a small penis
and was picked on in gym class
never really had a girlfriend
probably stared at ya moms ass
comparing it to all the bitches in your dads porn stash
now all the pages are stuck together
you can’t put them back
found your sister sexy
because you both collect ball sacks
i would not reply to this but... I have had sixteen ex girlfriends and four of them committed suicide because of shit that would make you cry like a little girl. I have a fucking mind so yeah i do appeal o people's emotions but the definition i use is a form of art that evokes sadness because of the first poem i ever wrote. I know more about life now then you ever will regardless of how smart you think you are but thanks for your post love. Open up your mind and see what you will learn
Anonymous
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but we have places for that miss magdalena..im not tryin one to be one to bash new users but some are aware of the system and still attempt to abuse in a vein effort to plug themselves. i should not take an active part in trying to do so..you are right.
but im the type that always talks shit. i think you are gr8.
but if somebody posts some garbage askin for a reply im gonna say somethin........
but im the type that always talks shit. i think you are gr8.
but if somebody posts some garbage askin for a reply im gonna say somethin........
Anonymous
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no worries mags. i was'nt talkin at you. at risk of sayin somethin that might offend a lady....you are goergous,ol school dup knowledge, know what's what ,wise, in what happenns round these parts............still gorgeous but youngans look to you for how to act on you.i think a proper model is right here for some of you tweeners to get a lil ahhh boones farm drinkin bitches ..get a lil responsibility there,,,,
pay attention to mags..........
but no offense lady,,,,
pay attention to mags..........
but no offense lady,,,,
Anonymous
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Well, fuck.
Just read the damn poem.
The poet does one thing,
and that's welcome the world
in to whatever they make
of them.
I take you as the brooding type,
but more for effect.
Yet, you're heavily involved now,
and it's taking you along.
You'd like to stop,
but what else is there?
All this doom and gloom,
probably collected a few scars on the way.
You never meant bad by it.
You just mastered what you knew,
or so you thought.
Then that fucker mastered you,
and truth be told.
All those demons, blood and souls,
I guess it tells me you have no guts.
All the guts in the world, when it's happening
Enought of the shut-down to survive the shit,
but not enough guts to get in there
and stop it.
Hell, there's probably a little me there
somewhere.
I struggle to stop it myself.
I could be a mile and a half off,
but I don't get further away,
not when you ask for it,
and I can't hold that against anyone.
Just read the damn poem.
The poet does one thing,
and that's welcome the world
in to whatever they make
of them.
I take you as the brooding type,
but more for effect.
Yet, you're heavily involved now,
and it's taking you along.
You'd like to stop,
but what else is there?
All this doom and gloom,
probably collected a few scars on the way.
You never meant bad by it.
You just mastered what you knew,
or so you thought.
Then that fucker mastered you,
and truth be told.
All those demons, blood and souls,
I guess it tells me you have no guts.
All the guts in the world, when it's happening
Enought of the shut-down to survive the shit,
but not enough guts to get in there
and stop it.
Hell, there's probably a little me there
somewhere.
I struggle to stop it myself.
I could be a mile and a half off,
but I don't get further away,
not when you ask for it,
and I can't hold that against anyone.
I agree with Panama.
Pathos, you invite poems then seem to slam those who respond - what is the point? Your behavior is not in keeping with the philosophy of this site, which is to encourage creativity and writing skills. I'm watching you, so reel it in, or I'll shut the comp down.
Pathos, you invite poems then seem to slam those who respond - what is the point? Your behavior is not in keeping with the philosophy of this site, which is to encourage creativity and writing skills. I'm watching you, so reel it in, or I'll shut the comp down.
