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Last Words

APERSON
Eris
Fire of Insight
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Poetry Contest

Write about the last words you heard from someone
the last thing that someone, important to, said before leaving.

or

what you said to someone you never got another chance to talk to again.

no word limit
one poem per person

Thank you.

tommyfromtheblock
done
Strange Creature
United States
Joined 25th Oct 2013
Forum Posts: 3

bye now rita

Grace
ldryad
Guardian of Shadows
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Joined 25th Aug 2011
Forum Posts: 6318

Last Word

On her bed of pain
my ailing aunt
small as a child
wan as a moon
at the first light
of dawn
whimpered softly

she moaned in her groan
hurt in her pain
cry out softly
'...Mamma...'
she died at 9.15pm
Thursday
she was 89.

poet Anonymous

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RavenofSorrow
Fire of Insight
United States 3awards
Joined 19th Jan 2011
Forum Posts: 406

Always cross in the green never I between. Wrap It before you tap it. -some guy

lepperochan
CraicDealer
Tyrant of Words
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Joined 1st Apr 2011
Forum Posts: 8459

no Delilah
all I have left is my hair
you can't have it
besides, I'm too tired
to sit for a cutting


praveengola
Lost Thinker
India 1awards
Joined 23rd Feb 2013
Forum Posts: 58

"You are the one Who Made me crazy Inside."

I was born with simplicity ,
Never knows to flirt someone ,
But one day I met by chance ,
A good soul of someone.

We started to spend ,
our endless day and nights ,
Not in a pretext to got something ,
But being a clear heart inside.

Slowly on one day We realized ,
That an invisible thread made us tied ,
On that special day He said.....
"You are the one Who Made me crazy Inside."


QiqaQueSquaredKaiO
Lost Thinker
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Joined 6th Nov 2013
Forum Posts: 3

See if you wanna hate me
you got to do it right

I don’t want to see you jiggling a pot-belly
I wanna see that it tight
Need to hear you talk the talk
Wanna see you walk the walk
See I need to know that you perfect

I want you to have the personality Of Jesus Christ himself
I want you to have the wisdom of Solomon
Need you to have the courage of David
The strength of Goliath
Thing is I need to know that you have faith in yourself

See if you want to hate me
You got to do it right

Need you to have a smile that attracts ambition
I need you to move
I need you to be rooted right down
See I want you not to miss a verb nor comma nor adjective
I need to know that you literate

See if you wanna hate me
You got to do it right

See I need you to pray
I need you to walk on water
I need you to change water into wine
I need you to feed 5000 with a loaf and 1 fish
See I need to know that you believe

See if you want to hate me
You got to do it right

I need to see that halo above your head
I need to look up to see you
See I need to worship you
I wanna bow down to you
Need to give you the utmost respect
Thing is I need to know that you higher than me

I wanna beg to see you
I wanna crawl to seek your help
I wanna climb all odds to be with you
I wanna surpass all obstacles to be one with you
see I need to know that you worth it

She looked me straight in the eye and said :See if you wanna hate me
You got to do it right.

APERSON
Eris
Fire of Insight
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Joined 24th Apr 2012
Forum Posts: 1081

Thank you all.

PsychicApocalypse
Darker Half
Dangerous Mind
Belize 16awards
Joined 5th Dec 2012
Forum Posts: 1263

deleted (sorry double entry)

PsychicApocalypse
Darker Half
Dangerous Mind
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Joined 5th Dec 2012
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A Solitary Goodbye

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Tick Tock, Tick Tock

The ticking of the clock
to me,
is like a time bomb.


Tick Tock, Tick Tock

It rings in my ears,
It's the only thing,
I seem to hear,
as the blade
slicing through my veins,
and consciousness slowly,
starts to disappear.


Tick Tock, Tick Tock


The beating of my heart,
slows down, as my breath becomes,
short-ed,
gasps.
Time re-lapse.
No time to recover,
this time..


Tick Tock, Tick Tock


Just a memory,
of a lover, to whom,
I've whispered a farewell.
No chance to look back,
For I am no more,
my spirit is up for sale.


Tick Tock, Tick Tock

The last color my eyes see,
is the red liquid leaking out,
from me.
Oh! Fate.
Destiny,
has become,
me.


Tick Tock, Tick Tock

Not a soul,
to wish me a tearful 'Goodbye.'
Just silence, overwhelms,
the little life,
that I hold on to,
at this moment in time.


Tick Tock, Tick Tock


For this is the moment I die,
and with my last sigh,
I breathe my last breath,
on the door,
eternal sleep knocks,
as the clock
keeps the steady beat of...


Tick Tock, Tick Tock

poet Anonymous

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Grace
ldryad
Guardian of Shadows
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Joined 25th Aug 2011
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Eris, thank you! for the honour of being named winner...we are all winners in our own way.

rachelmae
Twisted Dreamer
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Joined 16th Feb 2014
Forum Posts: 55

A wonderful elderly lady at my church, Paulene, may she rest in peace..
her last words to me.. "you're a very beautiful young lady"
and I said thank you.

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