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I'm gonna slip in another one
Darker than black
the evening drops like fresh dew upon waking grass
stealing comfort with its swift lonely gust
from the clouds looming above the fading light,
a cold embrace like that of death itself.
the tasteless sky, ablaze in ruby fire
swallowing whole secrets, drawing tears
renditions of grief on this canvas of life
painting the light of a silvery moon.
as night creeps upon the world
the lingering sadness turns to fleeting despair
in the black all things become one, as if wellstained
still curtains conceal what the shadows cannot.
Darker than black
the evening drops like fresh dew upon waking grass
stealing comfort with its swift lonely gust
from the clouds looming above the fading light,
a cold embrace like that of death itself.
the tasteless sky, ablaze in ruby fire
swallowing whole secrets, drawing tears
renditions of grief on this canvas of life
painting the light of a silvery moon.
as night creeps upon the world
the lingering sadness turns to fleeting despair
in the black all things become one, as if wellstained
still curtains conceal what the shadows cannot.
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Grace
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Congratulations to Paul Summerscales for winning the competition, and to the other winners...The White Rabbit (DiamondDustMirror) and Utmakalitho (LunaObscura), talented writes...awesome guys!!
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Thanks very much Crim I appreciate it
and nice going diamonddustmirror and lunaobscura
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Great competition crimsin! Thanks for hosting and congrats to all winners ... Hopefully everyone got to enjoy the holiday as well.
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Congratulation to Paul Summerscales and the runner-ups. Very cool pieces.
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