Poetry competition CLOSED 14th October 2013 4:43am
WINNER
case28 (Alexander Case)
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RUNNERS-UP: PsychicApocalypse and KittyFromHell

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Donnydarko
Drops0fEvil
Twisted Dreamer
United States
Joined 10th July 2010
Forum Posts: 3

Poetry Contest

You gotta story bout be played..?
Breathe and relive the solemn lonely days of being crushed by the one you true loved/love. be real.. dont compete against one another, just live in the moment for once and pour it out till your pitcher is empty..

Donnydarko
Drops0fEvil
Twisted Dreamer
United States
Joined 10th July 2010
Forum Posts: 3

sorry bout the typo :/ lol

KittyFromHell
Fire of Insight
United States 7awards
Joined 31st May 2013
Forum Posts: 585

Does the poem have to be new?

gorryone810
Thought Provoker
Germany 3awards
Joined 27th Nov 2011
Forum Posts: 135

Attention! Extrem Content

I gauged your eyes out, I tore you apart.
I never knew a spine was that hard.
It didn't sound nice, when I broke your neck,
but that's your own fault, since you came back.

I had something going for over a year,
I never could tell you, cause I held you dear.
I knew, that you loved me and you could not bear
that I did not love you and could disappear.

But one day you found out, when we were in bed,
you came home early and found my "sex ed",
you screamed at me and chased her away,
when I wanted to leave, you told me to stay.

You cried and you shouted, you called me names,
but I always told you, that the flames
in my heart were long since cold.
My love to you could not grow old.

You told me to leave here, to let you alone,
to think about all this, perhaps to atone,
but should I not know, if I would come back,
then I should just stay away. Suddenly I cracked.

Everything was so noisy, everything was so dumb.
You were always shouting, I had felt so numb
all these years I lived with you. My love was dead.
And suddenly my fist crashed against your head.

You tumbled back and could not understand.
I took the kitchenknife, that lay there, in my hand
and stabbed you fifteen times, or sixteen at least,
Your blood spilled all over, I must have looked like a beast.

As your body hit the floor and your last breath died away
I realized what happened and knew this was the day
to leave this boring life, that could never fulfill
my wishes and my hopes and dreams, I felt a sudden chill.

I stood there laughing at your body, at your garbled face.
"This is what I always wanted, that's what you get, Grace."
I knew I had to throw away her body very fast.
And then I thought of something I heard in the past.

I gauged your eyes out, I tore you apart.
I never knew a spine was that hard.
It didn't sound nice, when I broke your neck,
but that's your own fault, since you came back.

And that's the story of my love and me.
Now I have lost her, now I am free.
Only the policemen didn't approve.
But you know, all is fair in war and in love.

poet Anonymous

How To Kill The King Of Hearts

I thought I met you by fireside
Soon realized you were burning inside
Then you left me by lost moonlight
Running forever but you never hide
In the circles around me

You wear a mask but to me it’s clear
You made up your mind when you lied this time
Don’t you dare cozy up to me dear
I’m sick and tired and you crossed the line

I thought you were the love of my life
And by my side, but two wrongs don’t make you right
Cupid traded in for a knife
Stabbed me through the heart and bled me dry

Love left me to die by the bedside

Touched by angel
But strangled in the embrace of one bad star
Ill met, this golden stranger
Once bitten, twice taken advantage of and apart

You’re just a hole in my heart
Light of my life stranded me in the dark

PsychicApocalypse
Darker Half
Dangerous Mind
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Joined 5th Dec 2012
Forum Posts: 1263

I've Told You!


I didn't give a fuck.
The heart ache had cleared my judgement.
I didn't feel much,
when I kicked you out of the apartment.

You're such a jerk,
I've told you, I'm not interested.
Why are you asking for me back,
when you're not even freaking committed.

I know how guys like you think
   just because you're popular and famous,
        doesn't mean I'd fall for you, you dick.
Find some other chick,
  down to fuck.
To me, you're such a looser,
  and your music sucks.

If you were a little sorry,
If you were a bit humble.
Then taking you back would be okay.
But since,
 you're such a prick,
I wouldn't mind you dying like Steve, when he got stung by that ray.

Fuck you,
    Can't you just leave me alone.
Are sadden,
 broken hearted,
that I don't want you any more?

Go back,
 and pretend to fuck the brains out,
of the chick, I found you in bed with.
So she can lie to you,
   about how big,
      your shrimp dick really is.

You're such a poser and a joke.
Man, when I got with you, I must have been drunk
    as fuck.
I must have been bloody wasted, all these months,
for believing in such a lying little cunt.

I feel sorry for you
         and your life.
I feel even more sorry for the girl
       that accepts to become your wife.
She'll have to put up and deal with
     all your trouble with drugs.
Don't worry, I'll have some spare change for you
      when you end up a bum.

PsychicApocalypse
Darker Half
Dangerous Mind
Belize 16awards
Joined 5th Dec 2012
Forum Posts: 1263

FriEND

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I lost control
and tightened the rope.  
You screamed too much.  
Now you got no hope.  
I found out that by tightening  
it around your neck
Your screams died down,  
but my finger print stayed, now it's a mess.  

Oh well, too bad.
I kinda liked that terrorized look in your eyes.
No remorse, You should've known, You deserved it.  
It shouldn't have come by surprise
You crossed the line.
You knew how my mind worked,
You knew you were fucked!  
I warned you, didn't I?
You, my boyfriend,  
He was mine!  
Why?!

I trusted you,  
I'm not gonna apologize.  
From the moment you walked in,
I know, you read my killer vibe.  
You knew my unstable capabilities.
Oh, but you wanted to explain,
I told you I loved him enough to kill.
You didn't listen, now look at how it ends.
And to think, that for years,
we had been best friends
.

case28
Alexander Case
Fire of Insight
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Joined 16th June 2013
Forum Posts: 972


Perfect Loveless


Porcelain lady, sharp divine beauty    
with cold feet for walking over me.    
Fading pilot light,    
fingers pointed at self-regarding plane.    
Touching mine, kissing yours,    
every effort inflicting solace    
secretes into my distaste.    
Your vital touch    
snakes silent spells    
breaking my will    
to linger    
in my perfect loveless.

And when you’re forced to kiss my beard    
in our feeble re-enactment of passion,    
does the trimmed hairs around my lips    
spike loving thoughts,    
like a sly drug    
rousing tender flashbacks    
to when you held true passion    
between your lips,    
kissing hers?    
   


Written by Alexander Case

KittyFromHell
Fire of Insight
United States 7awards
Joined 31st May 2013
Forum Posts: 585


"Almost Lover"

You promised a sincere truth
Sadly delivering many lies
To my blindly mislead pursuit
It was your little amusement
My willingness to be committed
My faith in unreliable warrant
Playing right into your hands

Your dark eyes held me intrigued
They held some charming allure
You are a mean dangerous plague
To so many more girls than I
You're an addicting  intoxication
Spreading through souls and hearts
Leaving broken destruction behind

Your little mischievous twinkle
Was an evil glint disguised well
Signs of care soon proving fickle
At least, the ones for me were
Beguiling with your flirting words
From those soft full sexy lips
Waking a heart to be well disturbed

You were blessed with manly beauty
Slightly exotic to my lusting eyes
Short stature, but still pleasing  to me
Your voice of deep soothing sound
Relaxing me of all my defenses
I crumbled down helpless to let you in

Your lovely words of Spanish talk
And your taunting moans as a joke
Leaving me to be anticipating it all
Of what might have come to me
Still, I never gave it all up to you,
But regrettably would have for sure
Just like that, in a heart beat

The tingly feelings that I adored so
From just being near you a little
I thought certain somehow though
That You would be my forever
I gave away my heart, we faded away
So you became my almost lover

You, a gift of a beautiful nightmare
Became all too realistic for me
You perceived my weakness there
My emotion tangled up before you
Your malicious game you played
My heart later breaking in two

When we came together I was glad
It was a dream finally come true
But you weren't lasting to be had
You promised all your love to me
To be of hot sweet amaranthine
Forever was so short my love
Opening my eyes to the real you

Deep In my heart, I wanted infinity
But it was clear you weren't  ready
For anyone's love for an eternity
Still just a failing little boy inside
I wanted you too strongly, too bad
But I'm glad you never got all of me
You never saw all We could be


-- KittyFromHell


case28
Alexander Case
Fire of Insight
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Joined 16th June 2013
Forum Posts: 972

Thanks Donnie darko for the comp and honour. Well done to the poets who took part in the comp.  

KittyFromHell
Fire of Insight
United States 7awards
Joined 31st May 2013
Forum Posts: 585

Congrats for the winner... & thanks for the mention!

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