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Crush Your Enemies

PsychicApocalypse
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Poetry Contest

Write a poem containing detailed ways in which you'd crush your enemies or enemy.
Whether it maybe killing, or torture or wateva...
Give me a reason why you hate him/her.
make it interesting,
Make me feel your hate.
Make me visualize your actions in my head

Rules.

Nothing too long. 200 words max. (give or take a few)
2 entries per poet.

Edited: I must apologize for not making it clear that you mustn't use the name from any other  DU member.  
(Once again, Sorry)

Other than those two rules, knock your selves out
2 weeks.

(^_^)

poet Anonymous


UPs

poet Anonymous

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lepperochan
CraicDealer
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least he got my good side,  and it would seem that he put them words together all by himself too .  

sorry Missy,  its getting old I know ,  can't be any fun logging in and finding this garbage every other day,  can't say it bothers me anymore, not since  we saw who
he really is, and why he has to use his brothers picture as an avatar .I feel pity for him

Intricate_B
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RAGE!! On he 15th of october....



"FUCK!!!"
Is what I scream in my moments
Of fast thought and fury...
My moments of
BREAK YOUR FUCKING FACE!!!
With that curb.
The "rip the phone off the proverbial wall"
That is my patience...
And calm...
And sit back and relax
And take life at a glance.
"FUCK!!!"
Is what I scream
In my moments of temporary insanity
Boiled over onto the coals
That lit the fuse
To my "WHAT THE FUCK!!!!"
BULLSHIT!!
I want to reach out
And touch your lips
With my fist
To bloody the improvised pride on your mind.
But soft!!
The calming of the beast,
Inside the unwavering
Mixed up prideful mind,
Of the broken thoughts of mine.
Then calm...
The calamity of yesteryear ceases to be and...
Everything, cool...
Calm and collective. ..
Until the point.
Pride takes over and,
Again flows the glorious crimson
Of your once flawless,
Now flawed, scarred lip and nose.
Your endorphins released for my...
Calming, settle down?
Until next time....
Release?
Act upon one's impulse
And no more.
PRACTICE WHAT THE FUCK YOU PREACH!!!!
YOU BITCH MADE MOTHER FUCKER!!!!
Wait and see..
We'll see...
Then snap.

Intricate_B
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Anonymous said:<< post removed >>

Damn. That's fucked up. I thought this was about crushing an enemy, not being flat out disrespectful towards certain individuals. This is kinda fucked up. Guess it should've been explained in the details.

Intricate_B
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Anonymous said:<< post removed >>
Sounds like he's a creeper crush on you and Craic..

MadameLavender
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Wow.  No other words--just wow.  

PsychicApocalypse
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Intricate_B said:

Damn. That's fucked up. I thought this was about crushing an enemy, not being flat out disrespectful towards certain individuals. This is kinda fucked up. Guess it should've been explained in the details



Oh my gorsh.... This is my fault... Let the blame fall on me...

poet Anonymous

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Gg78
let it be
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Wowwwwwww!! Damn I feel bad missy has to be bullied by such a low life! Thank god she has the vagina to just ignore him! Wow

Intricate_B
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PsychicApocalypse said:[quote-216540-Intricate_B]

Damn. That's fucked up. I thought this was about crushing an enemy, not being flat out disrespectful towards certain individuals. This is kinda fucked up. Guess it should've been explained in the details



Oh my gorsh.... This is my fault... Let the blame fall on me... [/quote]

Don't let it fall on your shoulders Miss Lady fatal.. I honestly didn't mean for to think I was callling you out. I was simply saying that dude didn't have to be such an INCREDIBLE ASS HAT..

johnrot
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we definitely need a way higher caliber of stalker here. i for one feel so alone now. i like to at least see a lil more creativity in my obsessive shadowing.

poet Anonymous

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