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MadameLavender
Guardian of Shadows
United States 30awards
Joined 17th Feb 2013
Forum Posts: 2318

Poetry Contest

Here's your chance to get your first competition trophy !
This competition is for everyone but here's the catch: only those DU members who have not yet won a trophy, can enter a poem or poems. Everyone else who already has won something is invited to help me choose the winner.

So! If you have no trophies yet, submit any poem on any topic you want, any style, any length, old or new, 3 poems max, no collabs,

After the competition ends, everyone who has already won a comp, is invited to message me who they think should win this based on the entries. Most votes decide the winner and let's say have your votes in by July 14th, midnight , and I'll announce it on the 15th, who won.

Let's get someone their first trophy !! Go!

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PsychicApocalypse
Darker Half
Dangerous Mind
Belize 16awards
Joined 5th Dec 2012
Forum Posts: 1263

"AHA" Moment

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Sea
Breath
Within every second
You fly
I was tied,
My freedom, I beckon.

The sky
Blue
Wide and endless.
Snowy clouds
Beautiful,
Yet I'm restless.

My blood boils
Heated.
You see, I'm angry
with myself.
for living,
life
I've died,
I'm just a shell.

So I ran,
with the breeze,
either
to escape,
or maybe
breathe.

But I'm enchanted,
memorized
By the glittering sea.
No more
will he
Lay his hand on me,
That's my order
my decree.

I leave
my mark,
footsteps in the sand.
Leaving my past
embracing my future.
At least that's my plan.

So,
my wings,
I fly,
beyond this
magnificent blue!
It hurt,
but for the sake of my life,
I'll get away,
from you.

LynetteOkoroike
LynetteChiamakaOkoroike
Twisted Dreamer
United States 1awards
Joined 18th June 2013
Forum Posts: 53

I Need Acceptance In My Life
               
               
 
              Throughout my life
              I’m having a hard time,
              I stumble and fall
              And struggle through it all.
              I’ve tried to fit in
              But they always shut me out,
              Is there something wrong with me?
              Why they always put me down?

               I need to know what’s going on
               What’s it all about,
               I need to have a purpose
               That will make me stand out.

               I need acceptance in my life
               That will make me feel good,
               I need acceptance in my life
               That will put me in the best mood.
               Acceptance in my life
               Or someone to be loved,
               I need acceptance in my life
               from the Lord God above.
               Acceptance in my life
               Acceptance in my life

              I want to get in on the action
              But they never let me in,
              Now I have a bad reaction
              to this pleasantry sin.
              I’m rejected and heartbroken
              ‘cause they wouldn’t want me now,
               I’m in desperate need of someone
               to comfort me when I’m down.

               I need to know what’s going on
               What’s it all about,
               I need to have a purpose
               That will make me stand out.

               I need acceptance in my life
               That will make me feel good,
               I need acceptance in my life
               That will put me in the best mood.
               Acceptance in my life
               Or someone to be loved,
               I need acceptance in my life
               from the Lord God above.
               Acceptance in my life
               Acceptance in my life

               I don’t want to feel left out
               I want to put myself out there,
               I’m sick of being alone
               I just want a friend who cares.
               Yeah, I want to stand out
               I want to be recognized
               And to be known from the world;
               It’ll be the best thing of my life.

               What’s the point of me trying?
               I just know that they don’t want me.
               I can’t take this anymore!
               That’s not what my life’s trying to be.
               I need some experience
               That will help me through my life,
               I will gain some confidence
               That will take away my strife.

               I need to know what’s going on
               What’s it all about,
               I need to have a purpose
               That will make me stand out.

               I need acceptance in my life
               That will make me feel good,
               I need acceptance in my life
               That will put me in the best mood.
               Acceptance in my life
               Or someone to be loved,
               I need acceptance in my life
               from the Lord God above.
               Acceptance in my life
               Acceptance in my life

              Acceptance in my life
               


LynetteOkoroike
LynetteChiamakaOkoroike
Twisted Dreamer
United States 1awards
Joined 18th June 2013
Forum Posts: 53


Does My Image MATTER?
There is something
that I wanted to tell you.
 
                                     Earlier this month,
I was talking to my best friend
About a lot of important things
such as boys, dating,
                                     and careers.
 
                                     I came across a
                                     very, touchy subject.
 
I asked my best friend
about my body image.
 
I asked her
“Does my image matter?”
My best friend
                                     responded back with,
“Well, what do you think?”
 
To which
I start to think about it
for a very long time.
 
When I got back home
from my best friend’s house,
I went straight
                                     to my bedroom and
changed out of my day clothes.
I was completely naked,
except I was wearing my bra
                                     and my underwear.
I went to the mirror
and took a very, long look
                                     at myself.
I turned to the left, right, and back
and did the exact
                                     same thing.
All I see is a healthy, curvy,
Beautiful young woman looking
                                    straight back at me.
 
I started to ask myself repeatedly,
“Does My Image Matter?”
While I was asking this question
 repeatedly to myself,
                                     All of the past memories
start to come back to me.
                                    I kept thinking and
asking and thinking and asking,
until at one point, I gave up.
 
Does my image really matter?
 
Does my image matter
when I watch TV, surf the web,
Read newspapers, magazines, ads,
and I came across
Some attracting people showcasing
their perfect bodies
And when I look at my body,
realizing that it’s not
Perfect? That it’s not just like theirs?
 
Does my image matter
when my mother
keeps on pressuring
me
and not anybody else
in my family
to lose some weight?
Doesn’t she like my body
the way it is right now?
Why does she want me
to change it?
 
Does my image matter
when I finally got a role
in a TV Show,
Feature Film,
or a theatrical production
that I have dreamed of
For a long time,
only to find out the directors,
executive producers,
And my agent
wanted and pressured me
to lose a few pounds and
If I don’t do what they tell me to do,
they will reject me all because
I’m not following their standards?
That I’m not just like the
Other actors and actresses
With their perfect, fit, &
Attractive bodies?
 
Does my image matter
When I joined the
Bandwagon of
Millions and millions
Of people all
Across the country
Spending my hard-earned
Cash on
Products upon products of
Hair, make-up, skin, manicure/
Pedicure, weight-loss programs,
Diet pills/shakes, at-home gym
Equipment, gym memberships,
Diet plans, and all that jazz
Only to find out that
It never works with my
Hectic daily schedule?!
Or it never works
at all?!
 
Does my image matter
When I watch an episode of
“Glee” that is about
body image
issues,
When Kitty, a cheerleader, told
Marley, a glee club member,
About how to lose weight by
Just sticking 2 fingers in
Her mouth and
Just vomit so that
Marley can fit into
The costume that
She is going to
Wear in order to
Portray the role of
Sandy Olson
In their school’s
Theatrical production
Of “Grease?”
What would I do if
I was in Marley’s
Shoes?
 
Does my image matter
When the professionals,
Scientists, and authors
From the University of
Washington
Explain that the
Media itself
Is responsible for
Holding up “a
Thinner & thinner
Body image as the
Ideal for women?”
That they also state that
Throughout their
Childhood,
Women are extremely
“unhappy with their
Bodies”
And the percentage
Representing that
Statement
Increases rapidly from
Age 13 to age 17?
Was I happy or
unhappy with
My body during that
Time?
 
Does my image matter
If I stopped worrying
About my body?
That I could just eat
Whatever the heck I
Want?
That I could just sit on
My butt
All day long
And not get enough
Physical activity
So that when I
Walk down the
Streets of my
Hometown
Proudly,
nobody would
Notice how big,
Fat, and ugly
I have become?
Would I just be a
Doormat?
Would I become
An easy
Target?
 
Does my image matter then?
 
Does my image matter now?
 
Would my image matter in the future?
 
Would my image matter anytime soon?!?!
Now you listen to me.
Just take a very, long
Look at me.
What do you see?
What do you like &
Dislike about me?
Do you love
Or hate me?
And in your
Honest opinion,
 
Does my image matter to you?
 
Let me tell you something.
As of right now,
my image does matter.
 
It matters to me
And me alone.

LynetteOkoroike
LynetteChiamakaOkoroike
Twisted Dreamer
United States 1awards
Joined 18th June 2013
Forum Posts: 53


Guide Me Through The Storm
The sky turns dark and gray as numerous clouds rolled into town to stay

So as a person starts to feel depressed as important aspects of her life caused her to feel stressed

The sound of thunder shook the dark heavens as lightning lit up the dark sky

She faces her life’s challenges as time and time goes by

Drops of water come tumbling down and splatters on the earth like a stain

After all of the challenges that she has faced, she is in a lot of pain

The storm has arrived, and it brought a huge force to create a lot of damage;

She has given up her battle with the challenges that she couldn’t manage.

As tears fall down from the sky, so as the tears fall down from her face

“Guide me through the storm,” she cried, “Lord, with all of your grace.”

A few days later, the storm has ended and the clouds start to break away

She felt so much better to see that her life has healed and it was, in fact, a beautiful day.

She rejoiced and was glad and she thanked the Lord God again

That she made it through the storm once more and she feels no more pain.

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SuperSonicNothing
Lost Thinker
United States
Joined 6th July 2013
Forum Posts: 1

It's okay, I'll be here:

It's okay
You can cry
You don't have to run
I'll be here

It's okay
You can hit me
If that will make you feel better
I'll be here

It's okay
You can yell and scream
If that will make you feel better
I'll be here

It's okay
You don't have to end it all
But even if you do
I'll be here

SweetHaven
SammiE2me
Twisted Dreamer
United Kingdom
Joined 9th Apr 2013
Forum Posts: 20

Loving the way you make me feel

Loving the way you make me feel
Making what we have seem real.
Even with these great vibes,
I have my doubt
Because I don't really know what you're all about.
You could be playing me for all I know
Obtain my trust and put me on show
As a desperate woman wanting something she's not destined to have.
Torturing her mind,
Her loins
But not causing her heart's death.

You've done what only two others were able to do.
You made me look beyond penetration,
Gave me that mind stimulation,
And showed me that love can be true.
For them I'd have done anything
But I settled for the substitutes.
No regrets because my 'Minnie me's'
I love them to death.
Gladly making sacrifices for them
Until my last breathe.

Now getting to talk to you
A kiss is what I want to be true.
I want you to see what you can do with your heart.
And maybe help guide you to find that well lit path.
Darkness will always follow us,
When our eyes are closed.
Just remember to open them
And expose your soul
To someone that makes you feel whole.
I can accept that I'm realistically not the one.
A woman in love with the idea of being in love, I've become.
My clock time has always been wrong.
Time, I think, to buy a new one.

The way you make me feel
Gives me vision.












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