Poetry competition CLOSED 24th April 2013 4:35pm
WINNER
kriticool
kriticool
RUNNERS-UP:
Boothang88
and LobodeSanPedro
True feelings
Poetry Contest Description
Post a poem about how you truly feel about someone in your life.
You can have up to two poems posted. I want you to make it detailed and full of your feeeling. I want to be able yo feel your pain, love, and/or sadness I wish you luck
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This is for Joseph Meier, or Joe as he prefers me to call him. He saved me from a hellish life when I was at my lowest point ever, and he showed me my true worth and the promise of a bright future as his woman forever. I love him more than life itself.
- Dearest Heart -
Oh, my dearest heart, twin to my soul,
I love you with the utmost of my being.
Both with passion beyond all control…
And with a heart beyond mortal seeing!
With everything I am and all I ever was,
I love you, and am yours for all of time.
And I shall love you ever, without pause,
Until the stars become far less sublime…
Than the magic of our fair beating hearts.
Even galaxies beyond all mortal counting,
Have less of our true enchantment’s arts.
All universes are in our love, abounding!
I long to hear your heartbeat as we lie…
Wrapped in each other’s arms, at night!
I long to kiss you, until it makes us sigh,
Until we are lost: in every sort of delight.
To hear you whisper my name lovingly…
As I rest my head upon your bare chest,
That is like unto earthly paradise, to me.
You are the heaven that I long for best…
And I am the angel who, is home at last,
At your side, where I forever belonged!
Soon, you will part from a haunted past.
Your future with me will be, like a song!
We shall sing brightly, in our happiness…
And the good spirits will all sing with us.
I will attire myself in most splendid dress,
And give myself to you in a lover’s trust.
The summer birds shall sing in their joys!
But we two lovebirds will have our own.
Free of hatred and sorrow that destroys,
We will be together, one love, one home.
We are two dearest hearts, one rhythm…
Bound beyond all time, to walk together.
And in your face I see the beauty within!
I am yours my dearest, now and forever.
- Dearest Heart -
Oh, my dearest heart, twin to my soul,
I love you with the utmost of my being.
Both with passion beyond all control…
And with a heart beyond mortal seeing!
With everything I am and all I ever was,
I love you, and am yours for all of time.
And I shall love you ever, without pause,
Until the stars become far less sublime…
Than the magic of our fair beating hearts.
Even galaxies beyond all mortal counting,
Have less of our true enchantment’s arts.
All universes are in our love, abounding!
I long to hear your heartbeat as we lie…
Wrapped in each other’s arms, at night!
I long to kiss you, until it makes us sigh,
Until we are lost: in every sort of delight.
To hear you whisper my name lovingly…
As I rest my head upon your bare chest,
That is like unto earthly paradise, to me.
You are the heaven that I long for best…
And I am the angel who, is home at last,
At your side, where I forever belonged!
Soon, you will part from a haunted past.
Your future with me will be, like a song!
We shall sing brightly, in our happiness…
And the good spirits will all sing with us.
I will attire myself in most splendid dress,
And give myself to you in a lover’s trust.
The summer birds shall sing in their joys!
But we two lovebirds will have our own.
Free of hatred and sorrow that destroys,
We will be together, one love, one home.
We are two dearest hearts, one rhythm…
Bound beyond all time, to walk together.
And in your face I see the beauty within!
I am yours my dearest, now and forever.
When I sit around and think
What he means to me
I get lost in thought and fear
Tomorrow is so far away
I can't let go of yesterday
He's stolen my heart, I don't think he cares
I feel like I'm breaking inside
I just want him to see
What he means to me
Until then....
Why?
What he means to me
I get lost in thought and fear
Tomorrow is so far away
I can't let go of yesterday
He's stolen my heart, I don't think he cares
I feel like I'm breaking inside
I just want him to see
What he means to me
Until then....
Why?
My Adelaide--you amazed me
in so many pleasant ways;
you're smart and lovely,
elegant and compassionate.
You walk the walk, you talk the talk,
and your actions speak louder
in your own philanthropic ways.
You gain respect with your attitude
and mutual admiration among your peers,
and above all you have a heart so pure
filled with love and nothing more.
I admired your sense of humor
when you said, “Cars run on water.”
Nobody has the courage to argue,
for you got a strong conviction.
You got subtle ways of saying things;
somebody has to pay attention,
or else they lose your love and affection.
You were just blooming…my lovely Adelaide
just like the violet flowers from your farm
when I was first attracted by your charm.
We both sucked the nectars with desires:
longing for something, we can’t explain;
we didn’t know then that was a prelude
to a love eternal, our spirits shall exude.
Your eyes which can see through my mortal soul
and your silky, long flowing hair - an envy
of every damsels in town, including the winged dainty Lady
who lives in the nearby mountain - her kingdom by the sea.
I’ve always dreamt about you every single night
trying to recreate that moment when I held you tight;
I can still feel your warm, soft body next to mine
as we embraced and kissed for the very first time!
Oh my Adelaide--my lovely Adelaide
the bittersweet memories, shall I regret?
For only in my dreams could I,
make love with you after that fateful night.
Who would have thought that we shall meet again
if not by stroke of Fate, then what could have been;
your silent prayers could have reached the heavens,
when you claimed me that night…
a night - both of us won’t ever forget!
My Adelaide--you are the reason
I was able to fly once more!
Day after day you encourage my dreams,
uplift my spirits and inspire my heart;
you challenged me to be the best as I can be,
and transformed me in every way.
Yet, you love me for who I am,
and not for what you wanted me to be.
Sometimes I think it would be better
that you just pierce my heart,
so I won’t feel the pain of your heartache -
a secret: I promised to keep till the end.
Let’s forget the past and enjoy the present;
savor every moment as if it’s our last.
The doctors said you have a murmuring heart
when I took you to the emergency ward;
it was absolutely true for you never really shout
what you truly feel deep inside.
As I sat down beside your hospital bed,
and watched you while asleep;
I prayed solemnly to God to take me instead,
for you don’t deserve to leave early
with your dreams and hopes partially fulfilled.
In these times of uncertainty
when all your needs and fear collide
just remember I’m always by your side;
set aside your pride, my lovely Adelaide
to me you can always confide.
Have faith in the Lord above, leave your worries behind;
be happy at all times and live your life to the fullest.
Set your mind to automatic cruise control,
and let your love--guide its course.
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thepunisher said:I love her
But she hated me
I need her
But she doesnt need me
I bleed for her
But she just laughs at me....
[right]Perhaps The Punisher needs to garnish her... on the premise she'll see
I’m such a psychopath
a weirdo and
it’s caused
by her
and I guess you may wonder
to whom we refer
that redrose enhanced
a touch of myrrh
of course we speak of “the fine" Ambur
her
twin beams, bust seams
how they guide;
glowing light
such a
festive sight
making each day right
and
I can imagine
the same for the night
to taste with one's face
the purest
delight
her hair
sprayed against
the sky
whispering softly that
I’m her
guy
abundant,
the handful
I would cherish it well
interceders dispersed
dispatched
fairly well
[/right]
But she hated me
I need her
But she doesnt need me
I bleed for her
But she just laughs at me....
[right]Perhaps The Punisher needs to garnish her... on the premise she'll see
I’m such a psychopath
a weirdo and
it’s caused
by her
and I guess you may wonder
to whom we refer
that redrose enhanced
a touch of myrrh
of course we speak of “the fine" Ambur
her
twin beams, bust seams
how they guide;
glowing light
such a
festive sight
making each day right
and
I can imagine
the same for the night
to taste with one's face
the purest
delight
her hair
sprayed against
the sky
whispering softly that
I’m her
guy
abundant,
the handful
I would cherish it well
interceders dispersed
dispatched
fairly well
[/right]
Anonymous
But I wouldn't tell you anyway
I love someone
They are all I see
But they see
Everyone but me
I am a teenager
So it may be the
Hormones,
Probably not,
But I am stuck
Not wanting to lose
A friendship
The bond between us
I know that you
Would accept me
As I am
And still love me
But not the same way
And I can't hurt you
I know we would
Be ridiculed
Because nobody
Around us
Accepts this
Kind of love
And it hurts
To say
I don't love you
And not cry
Because I know
It will never happen
Not between us
Perfect you
And screwed up me
Not between us
Popular you
And antisocial me
Not between us
Because not yet
Is this love accepted
By your crowd
Not completely
By our little world
This unrequited love
Between two girls
But you are my
-Everything
I love someone
They are all I see
But they see
Everyone but me
I am a teenager
So it may be the
Hormones,
Probably not,
But I am stuck
Not wanting to lose
A friendship
The bond between us
I know that you
Would accept me
As I am
And still love me
But not the same way
And I can't hurt you
I know we would
Be ridiculed
Because nobody
Around us
Accepts this
Kind of love
And it hurts
To say
I don't love you
And not cry
Because I know
It will never happen
Not between us
Perfect you
And screwed up me
Not between us
Popular you
And antisocial me
Not between us
Because not yet
Is this love accepted
By your crowd
Not completely
By our little world
This unrequited love
Between two girls
But you are my
-Everything
kriticool said:
[right]Perhaps The Punisher needs to garnish her... on the premise she'll see
I’m such a psychopath
a weirdo and
it’s caused
by her
and I guess you may wonder
to whom we refer
that redrose enhanced
a touch of myrrh
of course we speak of “the fine" Ambur
her
twin beams
how they guide
glowing like light
such a
festive sight
making each day right
and
I can imagine
the same for the night
to taste with one's face..
the purest
delight
her hair
sprayed against
the sky
whispering softly that
I’m her
guy
abundant,
the handful
I would cherish it well
interceders dispersed
dispatched
fairly well
[/right]
please pass that poetry juice. i have no feelings! lol
[right]Perhaps The Punisher needs to garnish her... on the premise she'll see
I’m such a psychopath
a weirdo and
it’s caused
by her
and I guess you may wonder
to whom we refer
that redrose enhanced
a touch of myrrh
of course we speak of “the fine" Ambur
her
twin beams
how they guide
glowing like light
such a
festive sight
making each day right
and
I can imagine
the same for the night
to taste with one's face..
the purest
delight
her hair
sprayed against
the sky
whispering softly that
I’m her
guy
abundant,
the handful
I would cherish it well
interceders dispersed
dispatched
fairly well
[/right]
please pass that poetry juice. i have no feelings! lol
With my last remnants of pride
I tried!
Tried to hide my tear stained eyes
But, I don't know why, 'cause my cries went unnoticed
Let her apply that hocus pocus and fricassée my mind
Disguised as a love potion, was her cauldron of lies
A dogma comprised of make-believe bullshit
Low-down, dirty witch!
Flipped the script, burnt me alive, and I fueled it!
Claimed she had a tool kit, and promised to fix me
It took some convincing, but I wanted to believe
She had my full attention, yet kept A.D.H.D.
To forsake & deceive, was her nature
For her to persuade and then leave, made me hate her
Made me rate her right below my enemies
The indignity!
The lack of humility, for what she did to me
Is worse than the curse, she dispersed on me originally
What I hate most, that still hurts, is I love her unconditionally
Still want her close, in my vicinity
If just, for one more dose, invoked unrepentantly
So I can ravage that ass, primitively, with no remorse
Give her no recourse, from the force of my delivery
Yeah, that's what I wanna do
Me, the epitome of a fool, seeking love as a remedy
Not from above, but from someone who's a mystery
It's a damn shame, I'm so lame!
Barely half sane and I let this lady drive me all the way crazy
Fugazi!
Fake ass, phoney dame!
Now I'm ready...
To return the pain from Daniel Payn
~disDain~
If you just walked away,
Maybe my heart wouldn't be so broken.
If you just walked away,
I could move on.
If you just walked away,
There's nothing my closed throat would say.
If you just walked away,
I wouldn't be in angst.
If you just walked away,
I could finally let you go.
But you've stayed,
And nothing shall ever be the same.
Don't call me names,
When you don't mean them.
Don't come running back,
To break my soul apart again.
Maybe my heart wouldn't be so broken.
If you just walked away,
I could move on.
If you just walked away,
There's nothing my closed throat would say.
If you just walked away,
I wouldn't be in angst.
If you just walked away,
I could finally let you go.
But you've stayed,
And nothing shall ever be the same.
Don't call me names,
When you don't mean them.
Don't come running back,
To break my soul apart again.
The feelings that I have for my woman the queen, she has never in her life this divine love seen. It is white and clean, never unto her mean. Behold my queen who is magnificently fair. She is gloriously beautiful none do compare. I give her immense joy because I became a brand new boy. Perhaps in time become her novel toy. I love my woman without a doubt then she lifts up a joy filled shout. Grace and peace come down upon her head, many words to be said.