Superiority
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Poetry Contest Description
Construct a poem with the theme Superiority
We all know (or have known) a person who suffers from Ignorant, Arrogant, Impotent asshole disease ( Superiority complex) write a poem with this person in mind, it can be about why you think they are this way, your pity for them, if you despise them or even if you feel superior to others, just write about your experience with superiority.
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Superiority
You think I don't know
It's really you who is low
Your Insignificance resides
I see it in your eyes
You see, I feel sorry for you
Is this what you need to do?
You are bored and alone
Built yourself a throne
Wake to your empty life
So you go out to the street
Kick a stray dog
make sure he is beat
Do you feel better now?
Are you bigger somehow?
Superiority complex is clear
It is you who holds fear
False glory sustains
Emptiness remains.
No world limit
Any style
If your poem is about another member do not name them!
Don't like this competition idea? simply don't enter or comment
Two weeks
Have fun
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Superiority
You think I don't know
It's really you who is low
Your Insignificance resides
I see it in your eyes
You see, I feel sorry for you
Is this what you need to do?
You are bored and alone
Built yourself a throne
Wake to your empty life
So you go out to the street
Kick a stray dog
make sure he is beat
Do you feel better now?
Are you bigger somehow?
Superiority complex is clear
It is you who holds fear
False glory sustains
Emptiness remains.
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Not a great poem but you get the point.
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Does it have to be a new poem? I posted one today that sounds like it just might fit :)
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Very true Strider thank you for your entry :)
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Shallow Snobbery
You're oblivious
to your
insidious side
you hide
behind the
moon
fed by a
golden spoon
superstar..
not
by far
honey
can't see past
daddy's money
if you had to
get off your
high horse
feel remorse
struggle like
us common
folk
you'd choke
my dear
on your
fear
head
stuck up
your ass
kinda lass
looking down
your nose
from your
pedistal
quite
the
fool
dealing with
tough times
like the
illnesses
in my
rhymes
such the
princess
you'd explode
with stress
can't have
mess
oh no..
money is
all you
crave
its all
you rave
about
no doubt
you think you're
something special
snobbery
bitching
then switching
at the click of
your fingers
but your
toxic distaste
lingers
if i smash your
heavenly throne
would it be
considered
misdone
i don't
think so
you're so
shallow
no one
would care
unless you
paid them
to be
there
You're oblivious
to your
insidious side
you hide
behind the
moon
fed by a
golden spoon
superstar..
not
by far
honey
can't see past
daddy's money
if you had to
get off your
high horse
feel remorse
struggle like
us common
folk
you'd choke
my dear
on your
fear
head
stuck up
your ass
kinda lass
looking down
your nose
from your
pedistal
quite
the
fool
dealing with
tough times
like the
illnesses
in my
rhymes
such the
princess
you'd explode
with stress
can't have
mess
oh no..
money is
all you
crave
its all
you rave
about
no doubt
you think you're
something special
snobbery
bitching
then switching
at the click of
your fingers
but your
toxic distaste
lingers
if i smash your
heavenly throne
would it be
considered
misdone
i don't
think so
you're so
shallow
no one
would care
unless you
paid them
to be
there
faithmairee
Faith Elizabeth Brigham
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to you have always been so proud
to you who have always been so proud
and quick to judge or criticize my every move
i ask what exactly is my crime
do you despise me for nature was
kinder to me than you found her to be
do you envy me my successes
never acknowledging the hard work
that went into earning them
do you wish you had my problems
without knowing all the trouble i have seen
oh i pity you poor soul who in your
self-made misery can only look
upon me with unkind eyes
to you who have always been so proud
and quick to judge or criticize my every move
i ask what exactly is my crime
do you despise me for nature was
kinder to me than you found her to be
do you envy me my successes
never acknowledging the hard work
that went into earning them
do you wish you had my problems
without knowing all the trouble i have seen
oh i pity you poor soul who in your
self-made misery can only look
upon me with unkind eyes
diddi
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So can I post an old one ?????
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.:Why Fester's Reign:.
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you & your hate crimes
your...cultural wars
festering sores
tedious terrible things
your offerings of
vile & vicious names
you’ve been
running the same old games
convinced; believing
yours should be the
worldwide preference
the same frame of reference
saying true…for you
I should make deference
you
the bigot
turn off your spigot
you’re picturing
populist relations
mostly out of focus
my feelings…the ones felt
not at all, they’re not bogus…and
I’m certainly not the one to beg
yet in still I’m made to feel
that I’m
on my last leg…the paranoia
invoked to soak right through…and
that’s only because of
villains like you..
got to be the bad-bye to
what you…and
what you wanna do
the ways you refresh and
make evil anew
your terror; go figure
calling me nigger
yeah, go figure
discreet
then wilding out
doing what you do
but that’s up to you
again what’s the answer?
my loss, your gain?
no dude, that’s lame
you’re that calculating cannibal
an inhumane strain
sometimes I’m left wondering
will you ever be tamed
...
photo: kreddible trout
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Narcissus
Your appeal
is entirely dependent
on the reflective surface
of your lust for me.
Your features
are never more enticing
than when they're twisted
in longing for me.
Your flesh
is at it's most tempting
when you're trembling
with desire for me.
Your eyes
are most alluring
when they're enraptured
and holding my image.
I'd love to kiss you
when your lips
burn hot for me
and when the taste of me
is still wet on your tongue.
If you want me
you're going to need
to worship me
as I rightfully worship
myself.