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Superiority

becsta
Bec
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Poetry Contest

Construct a poem with the theme Superiority
We all know (or have known) a person who suffers from Ignorant, Arrogant, Impotent asshole disease ( Superiority complex) write a poem with this person in mind, it can be about why you think they are this way, your pity for them, if you despise them or even if you feel superior to others, just write about your experience with superiority.

No world limit
Any style
If your poem is about another member do not name them!
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Two weeks
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Superiority

You think I don't know      
It's really you who is low      
Your Insignificance resides      
I see it in your eyes      
     
     
You see, I feel sorry for you      
Is this what you need to do?      
You are bored and alone      
Built yourself a throne      
     
Wake to your empty life      
So you go out to the street      
Kick a stray dog      
make sure he is beat
 
Do you feel better now?      
Are you bigger somehow?      
Superiority complex is clear      
It is you who holds fear      
     
False glory sustains      
Emptiness remains.

becsta
Bec
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Not a great poem but you get the point.

poet Anonymous

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MissAngelic
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Does it have to be a new poem? I posted one today that sounds like it just might fit :)

becsta
Bec
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MissAngelic said:Does it have to be a new poem? I posted one today that sounds like it just might fit :)


Feel free to post your poem MissAngelic. Good luck

becsta
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Very true Strider thank you for your entry :)

MissAngelic
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Shallow Snobbery

You're oblivious
to your
insidious side

you hide
behind the
moon

fed by a
golden spoon

superstar..

not
by far
honey

can't see past
daddy's money

if you had to
get off your
high horse

feel remorse

struggle like
us common
folk

you'd choke
my dear

on your
fear

head
stuck up
your ass
kinda lass

looking down
your nose
from your
pedistal

quite
the
fool

dealing with
tough times

like the
illnesses
in my
rhymes

such the
princess

you'd explode
with stress

can't have
mess

oh no..

money is
all you
crave

its all
you rave
about

no doubt

you think you're
something special

snobbery
bitching

then switching
at the click of
your fingers

but your
toxic distaste
lingers

if i smash your
heavenly throne

would it be
considered
misdone

i don't
think so

you're so
shallow

no one
would care

unless you
paid them
to be
there

faithmairee
Faith Elizabeth Brigham
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to you have always been so proud


to you who have always been so proud
and quick to judge or criticize my every move
i ask what exactly is my crime

do you despise me for nature was
kinder to me than you found her to be
do you envy me my successes
never acknowledging the hard work
that went into earning them

do you wish you had my problems
without knowing all the trouble i have seen
oh i pity you poor soul who in your
self-made misery can only look
upon me with unkind eyes


diddi
Paul Summerscales
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So can I post an old one ?????

poet Anonymous

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kriticool
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.:Why Fester's Reign:.


http://8020.photos.jpgmag.com/3334147_10008_a7e6a7e5d0_l.jpg


you & your hate crimes
your...cultural wars
festering sores
tedious terrible things
your offerings of
vile & vicious names
you’ve been
running the same old games
convinced; believing
yours should be the
worldwide preference
the same frame of reference
saying true…for you
I should make deference

you
the bigot
turn off your spigot
you’re picturing
populist relations
mostly out of focus
my feelings…the ones felt
not at all, they’re not bogus…and
I’m certainly not the one to beg
yet in still I’m made to feel
that I’m
on my last leg…the paranoia
invoked to soak right through…and
that’s only because of
villains like you..  
got to be the bad-bye to
what you…and
what you wanna do
the ways you refresh and
make evil anew
your terror; go figure
calling me nigger
yeah, go figure

discreet
then wilding out
doing what you do
but that’s up to you
again what’s the answer?
my loss, your gain?
no dude, that’s lame
you’re that calculating cannibal  
an inhumane strain
sometimes I’m left wondering
will you ever be tamed









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photo: kreddible trout


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Narcissus

Your appeal
is entirely dependent
on the reflective surface
of your lust for me.

Your features
are never more enticing
than when they're twisted
in longing for me.

Your flesh
is at it's most tempting
when you're trembling
with desire for me.

Your eyes
are most alluring
when they're enraptured
and holding my image.

I'd love to kiss you
when your lips
burn hot for me
and when the taste of me
is still wet on your tongue.

If you want me
you're going to need
to worship me
as I rightfully worship
myself.


becsta
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diddi said:So can I post an old one ?????

Yes old poems are accepted as long as you have not won any competitions previously using the same poem.

becsta
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Great pic too Strider how do you post pics on the forums?

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