Country Song
zinger
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write me a country song
i dont care what it's about, just right me a country song :)
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zinger
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it can be about whatever you want. just want a country feel, something you'd hear from a country singer
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yes ma'am
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yes! lol ok
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like a snake
i thought i knew you
but i guess i don't
i'd love to love you
but i'm sure i won't
(chorus)
you are just like
a snake crawling in the grass
you don't even
have an ounce of class
you're the kind of man
a woman loves to hate
you can't be faithful
that's something i can't take
i don't want you there
hanging 'round my door
now it can never
be the way it was before
you are just like
a snake crawling in the grass
you don't even
have an ounce of class
spoken:
it's time you pick up your
alligator boots
your lucky rabbit's foot too
and get your big butt out the door
that's right, darlin', oh yeah
you heard that right, darlin'
your time is up and your luck
has just run out
it's time you moved on down the road
just go away
i thought i knew you
but i guess i don't
i'd love to love you
but i'm sure i won't
(chorus)
you are just like
a snake crawling in the grass
you don't even
have an ounce of class
you're the kind of man
a woman loves to hate
you can't be faithful
that's something i can't take
i don't want you there
hanging 'round my door
now it can never
be the way it was before
you are just like
a snake crawling in the grass
you don't even
have an ounce of class
spoken:
it's time you pick up your
alligator boots
your lucky rabbit's foot too
and get your big butt out the door
that's right, darlin', oh yeah
you heard that right, darlin'
your time is up and your luck
has just run out
it's time you moved on down the road
just go away
zinger
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nice
faithmairee
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Straight hater,
Sung this one in an old ABBA line
No wait a minute...down in Ole' Abilene
Wassit a dream? no I cant really say
broke ma string, dont sleep there today
Could be from anywhere like young Brandon say
Could be longhorn or a short one too
Guess will ride-it-out
Believing this one'll do
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Straight hater,
Sung this one in an old ABBA line
No wait a minute...down in Ole' Abilene
Wassit a dream? no I cant really say
broke ma string, dont sleep there today
Could be from anywhere like young Brandon say
Could be longhorn or a short one too
Guess will ride-it-out
Believing this one'll do
..
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.:Day-to-Day:.
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We gonna take off another pissed moan day
Put 'em back-on-their back-on dues day
Wanna birth? Gotta do-a New Kid’s day
Gonna keep it all dry that thirst day
Do a fun-‘er-real on that cry day
Run-it real what we steal for a fatter day
Miss her wedding; hold-it-off ‘til someday
Guess-her-gone-day.. was "that" best day
Two-sorrows gone farther swept the year away
Never-ever change things…now does they?
Lifetime of soured wine thinking Lady Day
Spooked the past; didn’t last saying ok
Future bright; said goodnight just to getaway
Role played, then the lust; then the fade away
Country-mile made ‘em smile…did it our way
Making sense? Your expense was the price to pay
…