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Obsession with Rhyme

diddi
Paul Summerscales
Dangerous Mind
United Kingdom 36awards
Joined 18th Dec 2009
Forum Posts: 1592

double post

knowthyself
know thyself
Twisted Dreamer
Germany
Joined 4th Feb 2013
Forum Posts: 6

me is them

there's a spy in my mind
that is totally blind
but he can hear
through my ear
what I am talking about
and so we can find
out
what I fear

and there is another freak
he controls my nightly sleep
he lives my dreams
and it seems
he looks through my very eye
while I feel so cheap
by
guessing gleams

oh, and fast but not last
constructing my fading past
there's number three
only he
can live in the time gone by
and always veils or blasts
my
memory

it seems like there is no end
there's a lot more hidden friends
in brainy grime
each one prime
I don't know the way they chat
but “me” that's just their blend
at
the same time
led
by tamed rhymes

paolajane16
PKR.virus
Twisted Dreamer
Philippines 4awards
Joined 31st May 2012
Forum Posts: 79

DELUSION OF LOVE AND POSSESSION

I am stirred by my obsession
Sweet delusion gone with love and possession
I am dreaded by my fervour fiery
Thrashing beneath my still sanctuary..
Though I fear myself’s illusions
I will surmount each solitary grieves
You will witness and savour my sweltering love
You are my soul,
my luscious,
my veracity of love and possession.

Devilish
Dangerous Mind
United States 15awards
Joined 24th July 2011
Forum Posts: 1722

Oh my god..fuck yeah baby.. thank you all. i have been able to cum like 15 times with no toys...lol.. i'm obsessed. wow. and i thought i was the only rhyming whore whore.. =). this is beautiful.

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RSena
Sena
Thought Provoker
Finland 3awards
Joined 13th May 2011
Forum Posts: 240

LET ME SEE WHAT I CAN DO FOR THIS ONE.

RSena
Sena
Thought Provoker
Finland 3awards
Joined 13th May 2011
Forum Posts: 240

Follow Me


Follow Me
We were going
Without looking for each other,
Knowing we were looking forward
To find us, and call us lover,
Yes is true I don’t believe in love
At first sight,
I believe in love in the first night,
And I told you it was going to happened
Because I knew that you knew,
That You wanted, my boo,
And it was clouds that I used like trampoline,
And sharks that I dressed like dolphins,
A rainbow like slide,
Where I left my self felt, until I finished
In a river of pride,
The noise, they looks like chants,
Of angel from the sky,  
And is not that I’ve been there
Why?, if I’m still alive,
But is because here, does not sound
Anything that inspired,
I felt something stroking my soul,
Burning me with fire,
And smiles in my beards start growing, it
Had wings so I could be like phoenix
Trespassing through the fire,
And smelled so good that even flower
Wanted my perfume,
And I grew up so much that I even grabbed,
Saturn,
And play with it, treated good and well
Of course,
I cringed so much, and I became small
Keeping the wings, with four feet’s, I flew like horse,
The trees were singing jazz or maybe blue,
Or maybe peace, maybe something else,
I was walking in the sea, and stopped the time,
To see if you could see me.
SENA


mysteriouslady
Thought Provoker
United States 1awards
Joined 11th Aug 2012
Forum Posts: 203

Demon Blood

He comes to me
Naked at night you see
To devour my innocent flesh


As my eyes are closing
His thoughts are opposing
He licks my sweet and soft breath


He drenches me
In his blood you see
He teases me with his swollen sex


At first I became loathing
When he tore off my clothing
Kissing my swollen, aching breasts


His blood covered lips are all over me
Dripping, sharp and evil to be
He knows his tongue feels best


My innocence is totally eroding
Inside of my sweetness is exploding
His blood has become my nest


Demon blood all around me
Hands are bound and tight you see
Forever in love with his sexual torture fest

storyfly
Lost Thinker
United States 8awards
Joined 12th July 2012
Forum Posts: 82

Barren Eclipse

His lips were like poison
just one kiss too much
his skin was like fire
I just couldn't touch.

Just one kiss too much
I must teat away
I just couldn't touch
my heart fell astray.

I must tear away
I have to hold on
my heart fell astray
with every note of his song.

I have to hold on
it's so hard to try
with every note of his song
our worlds collide.

It's so hard to try
with each dying note
our worlds collide
and together we float.

With each dying note
my pain lingers on
and together we float
to him I am drawn.

My pain lingers on
so I must say
to him I am drawn
but I can not stay.

So I must say
with a hole in my heart
I can not stay
and we move apart.

With a hole in my heart
my love still is strong
and we move apart
I start missing his song.

My love still is strong
this can not be
I start missing his song
he starts missing me.

This can not be
each word a lie
he starts missing me
as I start to cry.

each word a lie
from his poison lips
as I start to cry
on this barren eclipse.

Devilish
Dangerous Mind
United States 15awards
Joined 24th July 2011
Forum Posts: 1722

Omg how the hell do i chose out of these borderline masterpiece rhymes. fuck me.

diddi
Paul Summerscales
Dangerous Mind
United Kingdom 36awards
Joined 18th Dec 2009
Forum Posts: 1592

Just a speck  

What am I to say
words are the only form I have
how else am I to convey
my feelings
my appealings
my wanting to show you the
colour of my ceilings
my desperate
my genuinely
articulate
my quite particular
you make the white
of my orbicular
turn from round
to a lenticular
true needings
your the tarot
to my deck
of true readings
I would like to be
the speck
of dust on your shelf
that caused a sneezing
anything would do
as long as it held a meaning .
These are all I have
just words to use
there not an attemption
to bemuse
nor a contemption
of you
you electricute
all of my past
into an ash
and down a forever gone shoot.
You pulse
through my mind
my thoughts convulse
turning me blind
your warmth it pulls
away my DNA
causing it to unwind
I wish to divulge
and be kind
but you tell me
that honesty
is hard to find
well honestly
hear this from me
you blow out
my f**king mind
and you
are the glue ,  to the bind
in the spine , that holds together
all that I , could ever
hope to possibly endeavour
to begin to search  
within or without , whatever
I know that another day
never
shall I come across two
of you to ensue
with such fervour
as I do with you
I knew
from the second
I saw you .
Please don't wrongly take me
or strongly , foresake me
I aint a messed up crazy
that is just how you make me .
So what am I to say
when words are all I have
to convey .


FacePaint
Steven D
Thought Provoker
United States 8awards
Joined 28th Nov 2012
Forum Posts: 94

Shades Of Grey~


The darkest shade of grey,
Is that which comes on any day.
It seeks out those who’ve lost their way,
And leaves them with a price to pay.
Some know and refuse to see,
Continuing on carelessly.
Never knowing that they’ll be,
Someone’s most missed memory.
Others see the road they’re on,
And see it wont be very long,
Before it changes and they’re gone,
Just lyrics in some fools sad song.
You’ll never see it when it comes,
There’ll be no time to try and run.
So hope you’re proud of all you’ve done,
When shades of grey eclipse the Sun.
When all is silent, Here and There,
And all the senses start to tear.
The Grey will take that pain you bare,
Your screams will be heard everywhere.
Some may think they’re just too high,
But others know they’re gonna die.
Some may smile, some may cry,
When shades of grey fill up the sky.
So melt your pride and shoot your pain,
See what things you will obtain.
Close your eyes, you’re now sustained,
And free of all those heavy chains.
But listen closely when I say,
That feeling always goes away.
So don’t be sad when comes the day,
Your eyes are struck with shades of grey.
You’ll never see it when it comes,
There’ll be no time to try and run.
So hope you’re proud of all you’ve done,
When shades of grey eclipse the Sun.
You may think you’re just too high,
But then you’ll know you’re gonna die,
And you may smile..you may cry,
When shades of grey fill up the sky.
You may smile, you may cry,
But in the end its just a sigh,
When shades of grey fill up the sky.

FacePaint
Steven D
Thought Provoker
United States 8awards
Joined 28th Nov 2012
Forum Posts: 94

I, Too, Have An Obsession With Rhyme!

The House Of Sin~

One night, last year, I was walking the town
 
Drunk and alone, not a soul to be found.
 
When I Came by a house that was borded and bare,
 
This strange and incredible feeling drove me to see what was there.
 
I went through the door and right as I walked in
 
All over the walls, written in blood, it said "SIN".
 
A Woman in the corner said "Welcome, Son.
 
Leave your head at the door cause here you wouldn't want one."
 
And she gave me a tour, one I wont soon forget,
 
Of the house She called home, where the Wicked slept.
 
She said "Come with me, beyond door number one,
 
At first you'll be scared but then you'll have fun."
 
She opened the door and, sure enough, a chill
 
Ran up my spine and I thought I'd be ill.
 
Lining the walls were naked bodies bound,
 
Some of them dead but most were making sounds.
 
Cries for help muffled by gags and tape.
 
She said "Look around, which Soul will you take?"
 
At first I repeled at the thought of death,
 
And then deep inside the thought quivered my breath.
 
I made up my mind and plucked one off of the wall,
 
Then she said "How do you wish to make this one fall?"
 
I didn't reply, instead I dropped to the ground,
 
Then looked up at her calmly and said "Hold Him down."
 
I know this sounds weird and you may not understand,
 
But I wanted to take that mans soul with my hands.
 
What I did next was just a little grotesque,
 
So if you happen to be squemish look away from this text.
 
I bit a hole in his stomach, so my thumbs could fit,
 
I shoved them in deep and I started to rip.
 
His skin tore apart like a button-up shirt,
 
And He passed the fuck out, so I know that it hurt.
 
I reached under his ribs, pulled out his still-beating heart,
 
I put it into my mouth and just tore it apart.
 
Then the woman looked up at me and into my eyes,
 
And said "There's the Abyss, Boy, I see it inside.
 
Now lets move along cause here we don't waste Time,
 
We must be on our way to see what else you can find."
 
We came to door number two and all that she said
 
Was "Here you'll find Pain, so at the door leave your head."
 
She opened the door and I was pulled and forced in,
 
Then tied to a table, needles stabbed in my skin.
 
I fell suddenly to a motorless state,
 
Unable to move or even see straight.
 
Laughter, I heard, then a voice next to me,
 
"Now that you have seen, you must FEEL torturing."
 
Then a cold blade fell upon my bare chest,
 
I could feel the warm blood running down from my breast.
 
But the Pain didn't hurt, it was more Pleasure, in fact,
 
I was enjoying it so and she didnt hold back.
 
She paused for a moment, then pulled out some rings,
 
Pierced my skin then shoved them in and sent me into dreams.
 
I woke up to find I was hanging from a beam,
 
I felt a pain so intense I had to fuckin scream.
 
She looked up at me and said "I told you leave your head,
 
Now you'll see how true Pain feels and wish that you were dead."
 
She grabbed my arms and pulled on me until the rings ripped out,
 
One by one, then all at once, until I fell unto the ground.
 
Once more the pain was so extreme it sent me to a Dream.
 
I woke to find her stitching me and singing lullabies,
 
She looked at me and softly said "There's the Abyss, behind those eyes.
 
I knew you were the one when you came walking in,
 
And now you'll never leave this old House of Sin.
 
You can go, but you cant leave, this house now has your soul,
 
You're destined to do wicked things that no one can control.
 
Now lets go to the basement where the deal is set in stone,
 
And if you are the one I think, you'll come back up alone."
 
She led me to the basement where she took off all her clothes.
 
How long I made  Love to her, only some corpses know.
 
She screamed out in pure extacy with only moments left,
 
And as She came I kissed Her lips And bit into her neck.
 
She smiled as She slipped away And faded into Sleep.
 
I promised Her Forever and Her Soul I would keep.
 
I left my soul right there that night, though I was not aware,
 
And now, in me, the ones I take are all that you'll find there.
 
As I left the house that night I set flames all around,
 
Then walked away, just out of sight and watched it all burn down.
 
Now that the house no longer stands it can be any one,
 
And I will make a note of it to see the damage done.
 
So lock your windows and your doors, or you might let us in,
 
And find yourself forevermore resting inside The House of Sin.

RSena
Sena
Thought Provoker
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Devilish said:Omg how the hell do i chose out of these borderline masterpiece rhymes. fuck me. YOU ASKED FOR IT.
SENA

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