Poetry competition CLOSED 9th August 2012 5:23am
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Danii (ALICE IS DEAD)
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Poison

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Danii
ALICE IS DEAD
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Drip Drop
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I can feel him in me
We become one
Two stone hearts
Joined by one thing
This attraction is deadly
One slip, and we'd fall
I know we'll never be
More than this
So these feelings I will dismiss

His venom shakes me to my core
I can't stop now
I'm ready for more

Losing life was least of my conserns
Missing this chance
This highschool romance

I'd rather die
Than to lose this life
I'd want to try
And enjoy his rusty knife
With the blood of others on our hands
Drip Drop
Tears fall
By a fallen angels call
Drip Drop
Poison of love
Brought my peace

siphondarkness
Levi
Dangerous Mind
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Thank you for your entries

lightbaron
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"two men enter,one man leaves"

Pick your poison
at the gate
upon entering

Study
the tempting nectar
while obsession
lies lingering

Habitualize
the ritual
to find compulsion
as a settlement

    a regiment of steady edginess
   
    an emptiness
    devoid of sentiment

treat it as a sacrament
and see the stars as high
as firmament

treat it as escape
and one too many
may be a too late

siphondarkness
Levi
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Thanks, two hours left....Will not be judged until tomorrow after school..

siphondarkness
Levi
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Bah I am at a stalemate in my own mind. If I choose the person that won in my mind, everyone else would think that I only did it because of the person, but if I don't then I will be giving the trophy to the wrong person. >_<. I have to go with the poetry not the poet. I hope you underestand.

lightbaron
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Congrats Danii and Magdalena!
thanks for comp levi-good prompt

Might be of bad taste,certainly hope not, just want to say I quite enjoyed Striders "wise poison"as well

poet Anonymous

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Danii
ALICE IS DEAD
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Joined 27th Oct 2011
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Thx everyone!!!

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