Poetry competition CLOSED 23rd July 2010 1:36am
WINNER
rayheinrich (Death Plane for Teddy)
rayheinrich (Death Plane for Teddy)
Love Poem Contest
Anonymous
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like a feather in the breeze,
frivilous in melancholic ease
your loving does compose
in a subtly measured dose
and your gentle kiss does disclose;
your toungue is satin and your lips are velvet
Like a falling leaf, re kindled in glee
are the emotions that you gift me
Like the earliest ray of light
you send me warmth , you make it bright.
and so we kiss, and i wrote this
your tongue is satin and your lips are velvet
you quench my thrist like the first rain
you feed my heart its love, relieve the pain
you place me upon a pedastall for the world to see
you are maginificent with eyes of fire burning free
and when we embrace,i know my soul's love, i have met
your tongue is satin and your lips are velvet.
frivilous in melancholic ease
your loving does compose
in a subtly measured dose
and your gentle kiss does disclose;
your toungue is satin and your lips are velvet
Like a falling leaf, re kindled in glee
are the emotions that you gift me
Like the earliest ray of light
you send me warmth , you make it bright.
and so we kiss, and i wrote this
your tongue is satin and your lips are velvet
you quench my thrist like the first rain
you feed my heart its love, relieve the pain
you place me upon a pedastall for the world to see
you are maginificent with eyes of fire burning free
and when we embrace,i know my soul's love, i have met
your tongue is satin and your lips are velvet.
What shall I say?
Shalst I compare thee to a summer breeze
Or to an angelic beauty or sultry tease
You are more divine and rarefied than these
Every actionn and moment is a joyous please
Sent from heaven above
For you are my love
What shall I say of your radiant face
Or of your calming, warming embrace
So full of that eternally youthful grace
Upon my heart these memories do trace
A pure rarified dove
For you are my love
Why should I such speak of you, my love
When I can instead hold you like a glove
Forever, my love
For you are my love
Shalst I compare thee to a summer breeze
Or to an angelic beauty or sultry tease
You are more divine and rarefied than these
Every actionn and moment is a joyous please
Sent from heaven above
For you are my love
What shall I say of your radiant face
Or of your calming, warming embrace
So full of that eternally youthful grace
Upon my heart these memories do trace
A pure rarified dove
For you are my love
Why should I such speak of you, my love
When I can instead hold you like a glove
Forever, my love
For you are my love
Anonymous
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[quote]Jack Heslop said:
I (JohnnyPanic is a profile I used whilst my old one wasn't working) did say that the refrain had to be at the end of each stanza, David, by which I meant the very end
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Codswallop! Changes in progress! Should've read the rules*.* The poem will be changed to satisy this. See, this is what enigmatic monochrome pictures of Dali lookalikes with accordian/typewriters does to me.
I (JohnnyPanic is a profile I used whilst my old one wasn't working) did say that the refrain had to be at the end of each stanza, David, by which I meant the very end
. Codswallop! Changes in progress! Should've read the rules*.* The poem will be changed to satisy this. See, this is what enigmatic monochrome pictures of Dali lookalikes with accordian/typewriters does to me.
Anonymous
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Jack Heslop said:
[quote][quoted=competitions--300-0-6]David.S said:
[quote][quoted=competitions--300-0-5]Jack Heslop said:
I (JohnnyPanic is a profile I used whilst my old one wasn't working) did say that the refrain had to be at the end of each stanza, David, by which I meant the very end.
Codswallop! Changes in progress! Should've read the rules*.* The poem will be changed to satisy this. See, this is what enigmatic monochrome pictures of Dali lookalikes with accordian/typewriters does to me.
No problem. And the picture is of Charles Bukowski and his typewriter, though I concede that he does look a bit Dali-esque in that photograph...[/quote]
I hope you're happy now, I had to delete the original and resubmit the poem in my profile because the new style is so confusing as I'm not a computer.
Also, are we limited to one poem. Or can our poems be as endless as our love? (as poets, not you and me before you get too excited)
[quote][quoted=competitions--300-0-6]David.S said:
[quote][quoted=competitions--300-0-5]Jack Heslop said:
I (JohnnyPanic is a profile I used whilst my old one wasn't working) did say that the refrain had to be at the end of each stanza, David, by which I meant the very end
. Codswallop! Changes in progress! Should've read the rules*.* The poem will be changed to satisy this. See, this is what enigmatic monochrome pictures of Dali lookalikes with accordian/typewriters does to me.
No problem
. And the picture is of Charles Bukowski and his typewriter, though I concede that he does look a bit Dali-esque in that photograph...[/quote] I hope you're happy now, I had to delete the original and resubmit the poem in my profile because the new style is so confusing as I'm not a computer.
Also, are we limited to one poem. Or can our poems be as endless as our love? (as poets, not you and me before you get too excited)
Anonymous
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Anonymous
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Re-submission is something i'm going to try to avoid from now on unless I have to. Must make sense to someone though. I think it'll cause more double-poems as in people submitting a newer version of their poem rather than re-submit, which'll be nice for tracking a poem's/poet's progress!
The line was too perfect to resist so I didn't, maybe I'll make it up to you one day. (Have some cyber-pie) Thanks for answering moi little question.
The line was too perfect to resist so I didn't, maybe I'll make it up to you one day. (Have some cyber-pie) Thanks for answering moi little question.
Anonymous
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With time our love has grown,
now I have realized were meant to be together didn't you know?
Your kisses are soft and warm,
warm as a summers day.
Freezing hands that you warm,
with just that one touch I feel at home.
I know with you there's nothing to fear.
Your love and kisses warms my heart,
warm as a summers day
When I deeply stare into your ayes in amazement I feel as I may drown,
before I met you my life seemed upside-down.
Your beautiful eyes that are warm light brown,
warm as a summers day.
Open arms that are strong,
you always protect me; ever since you came along.
warm love, lips and eyes
warm as a summers day
now I have realized were meant to be together didn't you know?
Your kisses are soft and warm,
warm as a summers day.
Freezing hands that you warm,
with just that one touch I feel at home.
I know with you there's nothing to fear.
Your love and kisses warms my heart,
warm as a summers day
When I deeply stare into your ayes in amazement I feel as I may drown,
before I met you my life seemed upside-down.
Your beautiful eyes that are warm light brown,
warm as a summers day.
Open arms that are strong,
you always protect me; ever since you came along.
warm love, lips and eyes
warm as a summers day
Anonymous
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