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Dark and Nasty

Pravus
Thought Provoker
United States 6awards
Joined 5th Oct 2011
Forum Posts: 209

-Needless Revenge-

I loved her
I really did,
But she betrayed me.
And because she betrayed me,
She must pay!

I went to her house that dark, dark night
The one night that even the demons from the hell wouldn’t come to earth
It’s the one night that neither the almighty god
Nor the almighty devil could or would touch me
For my fury burned all around me

I went to her house while she was playing with her new boy toy
I slipped into the back yard
And in through the back window with ease
She nor her boy saw or heard me coming for them

Within seconds they are unconscious
I drag their limp bodies down the stairs
Thump, thump, thump
Their heads bounce off the carpeted steps
I tie their hands to the poles in the ceiling
I tie them so that they face each other

I pull out my knife, and set it on the table
I throw ice water onto their bodies
As soon as she sees me her face morphs into an inhuman hatred
I look her in the eyes and tell her, "watch,"
"You should enjoy this"
I grab the knife and throw it at her boy

He screams a scream that the Banshee's would be scared of
I rip the knife down
Nearly ripping his arm off in the process
Blood gushes out and covers my hand and the floor
She looks disgusted, I’m happy, but still hungry for revenge
I cut his bonds
He is still screaming
He looks at me and freezes, he stampers "w-what are you?"
I respond, "your worst nightmare"
I jump on top of him and punch him 1, 2, 3, 10 times in rapid succession
I rip his other arm to shreads
Tear his legs free from his body
Then I rip out his heart and put it in Her mouth
I cut her down and push her to her knees
I look her in the eyes with indifference
I then cut off her head, and watch her dead body spasm
I lay down in the red pool of death that I have created
I fall into endless dreams of sweet bloody bliss

I love Needless Revenge

... I hope you enjoyed this entry, this is the darkest poem i have ever written,
if you have any advice for me please send me a message

pretty_normal
Twisted Dreamer
3awards
Joined 29th May 2012
Forum Posts: 73

Pravus said:-Needless Revenge-
... I hope you enjoyed this entry, this is the darkest poem i have ever written,
if you have any advice for me please send me a message


It was brilliant, thank you for your entry! These are all horrific.. amazing, perfect, you people amaze me!

SupHomeboi
Thought Provoker
United States 15awards
Joined 9th Apr 2012
Forum Posts: 276

Shitting

As my bowels pass
Shit flows out my ass
Like water out of a fountain
It piles up into a mountain
As the pile of shit gets higher
My anus feels like it's on fire
It's dialating, my hole is torn
My shit have bits of corn
Feeling pain as I continue to strain
Drops of shit I'm making it rain
Damn that diarrhea
Plop is the onomatopoeia
Pressure makes my eyes squint
The stench is like torment
The aroma starts to rise
A gourmet meal for flies
A shipment of homemade fudge
With the texture of grime and sludge
An abundance of food consumption
Led to this bodily function
Performed by everyone
I'll remember to spray when I'm done

DollHardcore
doll
Twisted Dreamer
United States
Joined 11th Apr 2012
Forum Posts: 56

Eyes Set to kill

Antiseptics blend in the air and up my nose as I fall into trance...
My sight locks and
I picture him- twisted..

The sex appeal in his dying attire,
those sleepy, blood-drained dark brown eyes,
and  midnight stiched soul..

are paralyzing...

Oh, honey, i'm stuck on you
and your beast-like nature cripples my gaze..

E L E C T R I F Y I N G... M Y...   E Y E S

Baby, I want you
Wanna make scars in your name

Sex flashes in vision...
My pupils devour you whole...

He tiredly speaks with concern
his voice
spirals through the air
like a wave, deep and drowns the sound in my ears

"Are you okay"?

m
   m
       m
           m
                ...
Seductive  ...

I'd die to be the tainting stain all over you,
to dirty every one of those 17 years...

O H  Y E S...

To feel
your
pointed
steel,
seven
& a half
inches deep

inside me,
Hot
Ninety-nine
point
nine
degrees

Fire!

With a jolt at the top of my throat
One push of your steel in my mouth -

...A release in me...
velvet  c H a 0 s!...

The tease of the tip against my uvulva
makes
me
Sssick..

My lungs painfully itch from restriction & the suck of your blade...

Damn...

Light headed and L O W..
Gaging on your sharpened submission...

swallowing the flood
of blood within...

Call me ... Y O U R S.
             &
Lable me I N  L O V E.

I WANNA BE...

Tacked to the grasp of your mutilated arms,
pulled by the grip of your hands in my hair ripping red locks from the root...

C O N T R O L L E D
..roughly..

Got me racing up cum-brushed paint as your crawling up my body,

Face pressed against it

&
Clawing at the sheets..
letting you fold my position and pick me apart..

Limb by limb...

Eat my heart out,
&
This thought from my head...

Y O U

B I T I N G  M E

K I S S I N G  M E

                    D
                      O
                         W
                            N


-Teeth grinding on my flesh,
lips chewed cherry red-..

and licking the wounds from my stawberry womb.

Tasting
my
life,
spilling
on the tip
of your tounge
as
I grimace,
holding you-
raking your skin with my nails

I desire...

to kiss
your filthy mouth as I slide off your chin.

E R O T I C  D I S G U S T!

as you find your way inside.

& D E A T H

of a used body and a serene mind.

E S C A P E

of our breath...

as you push for satisfaction,

Piercing my inner being..

flashing our murder weapon...

My abdomen
aching for more...

A l l
         I n
                   A
                          G l a n c e

                                             ....
We defile eachother in the bed where you lay
          &   Suddenly...

I...
                             SNAP BACK!

....
  I find myself lost a sex scene, insanely constructed with gore...

I ONLY MIND FUCK YOU...

I dream
in a bloody, sadistic wonder
as I stare
&
you smile...

I
blink
&

I
reply,

"I'm fine".

Oh Baby,
kill me and keep it hushed...

Between you,
I
      &
these hospital walls...


Hope you like !

baptizedbydafire
Odyne
Thought Provoker
United States 1awards
Joined 16th June 2010
Forum Posts: 210

uncontrollable sex,disgusting lunatic incest
continuous masturbation,exhibitionist, voyerist
abnormal fetishes,necrophiliac fantasies i must confess
do bestiality sexually arouse me? yes
vampire molestation let me suck your blood from your clitoris
slipping dark dirty pictures through people's door step's
masochist,hurt me kill me sexual sadist
exposure of chest, forcing you to fuck a bloody penis
psychopathic sexualis be the best
this place smells of death,i must of made a real mess
I'm nothing more than a demonic guest
and nothing less then a scary sex pest.

freddwzz
Naked Satirist
Fire of Insight
Singapore 6awards
Joined 5th May 2012
Forum Posts: 496

myraids of premade-awareness
strays suffering in citadels
blowing false-trumphet
licking unmeltable ice-cream
letting in flacid bananas

unaware?

your fetus excrements they are
let them be shat as shit
before they become  
a self-gratifying
self-crowned royalty like ye

have pity for premade-awareness!
chance their senses a raise
bestow them knowledge to differentiate
to peace your fetus!

all hail jesus!

poet Anonymous

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JimmBGrace
Twisted Dreamer
Canada 1awards
Joined 21st July 2012
Forum Posts: 20

i don't know if i'm nasty enough but here it goes

"Arm holes"

you bit my foot
i love you too
and the fur you shed
i consider gold

six big needles
the consequence
for every action
comes all the notion

i'll eat my cat

sometimes
i think about the things i've said
you make me mad
you're lost again

Devilish
Dangerous Mind
United States 15awards
Joined 24th July 2011
Forum Posts: 1722

Hushhhhhh lil baby...


Whiskey
Black.
 
Serenades
The wolves..
 
Flash backs..
 
Movements of
hard times..
Nursery rhymes..
And..
 
Mommies crimes..
 
Those men in masks
 
I can hear footsteps
and voices..
 
"So Where is she?"
 
"Probably in her room
hiding in the closet"
 
"Who gets er' first?"  
Hell.
where's my belt?
 
She's a screamer!
 
"Mommy!"
NO!
 
Mommy!!
 
Come here little girl
You should be used
to this routine..
Its the pussy I enjoy..
And a must
I hear you scream.
 
To the point
I couldn't breathe..
 
The rhythm of my heartbeat
sang
 
 
Hush lil baby
don't you cry..
.
.
.
.
God
isn't
coming
again
tonight..

Devilish
Dangerous Mind
United States 15awards
Joined 24th July 2011
Forum Posts: 1722

Hushhhhhh lil baby...


Whiskey
Black.
 
Serenades
The wolves..
 
Flash backs..
 
Movements of
hard times..
Nursery rhymes..
And..
 
Mommies crimes..
 
Those men in masks
 
I can hear footsteps
and voices..
 
"So Where is she?"
 
"Probably in her room
hiding in the closet"
 
"Who gets er' first?"  
Hell.
where's my belt?
 
She's a screamer!
 
"Mommy!"
NO!
 
Mommy!!
 
Come here little girl
You should be used
to this routine..
Its the pussy I enjoy..
And a must
I hear you scream.
 
To the point
I couldn't breathe..
 
The rhythm of my heartbeat
sang
 
 
Hush lil baby
don't you cry..
.
.
.
.
God
isn't
coming
again
tonight..

poet Anonymous

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Grace
ldryad
Guardian of Shadows
78awards
Joined 25th Aug 2011
Forum Posts: 6318

Darksongs

Feel me again when you return
To this room we call our own
As I taste you again when I can
in our love-lust nest, our dark domain;
Remember the love we shared
Think of our bodies as one
Remember the promises you made
We are lovers from day one

Your soul is here within this room
Trapped by a lover's boon
Tied by the promises of a groom
Who nevertheless left too soon
Your careless exploration of a woman
Who is not yours to love
Is your own undoing
forced you to hold on to your vows

Remember the sharp thin knife
that cut your proud erection
the blood that spurts from the cut
Like extremely bright ejaculations
Remember the crossed incisions
that freed your testicles
from their snug confines
They look like teary eye balls

Remember the way you scream
as you felt the blood drain
out of the cut on your front
How you slowly realised
That you are tied securely on the bed
Good sex and a little sleepy dust
Can make you doze and then awake
To a full blown lust

I lay at the couch in front of you
Used my vibrator to make you see
How I loved my pleasure too
while you struggle with your heart
so untrue and unfaithful
that has now an irregular beat
Running out of red fuel
drained through your gaping front

You do haunt me every night
sighing your songs of contrition
soughing through my goosebumed body
I swear I can feel your tongue
on all my pleasure orifice
As I urged you on with my vibrating tool
To pleasure me until I am full
Until I wish again to partake of you

My trip to the butcher has been postponed
I have plenty for stew and enough battery





nagasaki
pittyfulmind
Twisted Dreamer
South Africa 2awards
Joined 8th Dec 2011
Forum Posts: 66

mr harrison

mr harrison was funny
he had a lot to say
but not to grown up people
with kids he had to play

he told them many stories
and gave them many sweets
in his big old caravan
they enjoyed good eats

but every now and then
something would go wrong
mr harrison would pack his bags
and move on right along

so mr harrison
stopped outside a school
he saw the boys play soccer
his mouth began to drool

"come here young man take this"
as he handed him a sweet
unknowingly the boy became dizzy
the last thing he'll ever eat

mr harrison towed his caravan
until his car broke down
young boy strung up on metal hooks
wearing a night gown

as nightfall came and all was still
parked just outside town
he heard the screams of many men
he's smile turned to frown

mr harrison ran up and down
trying to get rid
of the cut up body
of young charlie sidd

now charlie sidd was not just any
type of ordinary child
he was the son of metro cop
danny dog "the wild"

caravan door broke down
with crowbar and steel pipe
danny dog now saw his child
and started to go wild

they pulled mr harrison
out onto the road
threw petrol into his mouth
and watched his head explode

they unpacked the caravan
and found so many things
from collar bones to kidney stones
and a hundred young boy shins

no funeral for harrison
they threw him down a cliff
but they waited for a week or two
hi's body nice and stiff

charlie sidd was laid to rest
respect was certainly due
but no open coffin here
hi's chest was cut right through

so that's the end of my tale
my story done and through
watch out for mr harrison
he might just visit you

nagasaki
pittyfulmind
Twisted Dreamer
South Africa 2awards
Joined 8th Dec 2011
Forum Posts: 66

dances in the dark

light the fires and get the kids
tonight we have a feast
get the crosses and pierce their ribs
call upon the beast

draw the pentogram in the sand
throw around your salt
light your candles black as night
draw near your cult

shadow figures dance around
and unto hell they cry
one young virgin we now have found
tonight she has to die

bring glory to the hounds of hell
call upon their name
vicious stories they have to tell
let's inflict the pain

tie her hands and tie her feet
but do not gag the mouth
leave her naked no need for sheet
make sure her feet face south

stab her here and stab her there
blood flows just like water
blood is splashing everywhere
remember she's someones daughter

now a demon has come to see
what pleasures he can find
reluctantly he has chosen me
and quickly enters my mind

possessed i am, two in one
six six six seven seven seven
cursing now the only son
who came down from heaven

spit and drool and nails a claw
tongue as hot as fire
anything holy accused as hoar
enjoy my hellish desire

falling down,now on my knees
resembling a roaring lion
the demon takes hold like a disease
war we will have at mount zion

telling his stories using my tongue
he spits and shouts at all
"the coming is close, the end has begun"
"my master will break your wall"

i gag and i choke as the demon takes aim
at the virgin who's already turned blue
i bite and i chew and drink from her bowels
her stomache chewed right through

ripping at flesh and chewing her eyes
we eat and enjoy her all
suddenly the sun breaks the sky
and to my knees i fall

it's over and done, the night away
alone i sit here now
bloody virgin and me alone in the day
and so i take my last bow


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