Mind's Five
Naseer
Nas
Joined 13th May 2012
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Nas
Lost Thinker
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Poetry Contest Description
Write a 'collection' of five poems with the following as topics;
-Observation
-Definition
-Creation
-Destruction
-Correction
P.S: a collection is always connected. One way or another..
kriticool
Forum Posts: 492
Fire of Insight
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Joined 1st Nov 2011Forum Posts: 492
No. 6
..and The Last shall be First, and The First shall be Last..
I don’t know…and that’s what I don’t know
I offer no clear cut Observation
This shizzle? You can ask the administration
But sometimes seems like these threads by Definition
They’re stitched together; poems…*these writes
Possibly sewing up someone else’s loose ends
Nice sized bytes making amends
Setting the trends between a failing-to-a-sailing grade
Maybe supa-sizing an almost “B” that's beginning to fade
Needing the “proper input” Needing the right-sized bit of Creation
See, we really don’t make nothing
But we’re always trying to score something
We see-feel, then we manipulate
On occasion accentuating the already created
Already, that which is something
Not a dumb thing…given the right leverage
Attempting to keep a good-to-better grade point average
Despite the devil; we're keeping life at an acceptable level
Avoiding any type of negative Destruction
That’s a superior function
I don’t know…I’m just saying
Are these writer’s *writes? Are they honoring ALL Rights?
Are they the seed & feed for someone’s term paper?
Like the one needed by that psych major
The one penned about a past due “makeup”
As you know…this ain’t math.. Nor is it rocket science
But it can & does support an avid reader’s reliance
Wherein one can near-ace at the lab with a drop on a “good breakup”
The one that’s now past due for a past due make up
Where saved by the bell is what’s called a nice post-up
From rejection to Correction; to that tuition protection
Just credit me a footnote on my NEXT selection!
End of Collection.
[right]*feeding Aish's pet peeve
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I don’t know…and that’s what I don’t know
I offer no clear cut Observation
This shizzle? You can ask the administration
But sometimes seems like these threads by Definition
They’re stitched together; poems…*these writes
Possibly sewing up someone else’s loose ends
Nice sized bytes making amends
Setting the trends between a failing-to-a-sailing grade
Maybe supa-sizing an almost “B” that's beginning to fade
Needing the “proper input” Needing the right-sized bit of Creation
See, we really don’t make nothing
But we’re always trying to score something
We see-feel, then we manipulate
On occasion accentuating the already created
Already, that which is something
Not a dumb thing…given the right leverage
Attempting to keep a good-to-better grade point average
Despite the devil; we're keeping life at an acceptable level
Avoiding any type of negative Destruction
That’s a superior function
I don’t know…I’m just saying
Are these writer’s *writes? Are they honoring ALL Rights?
Are they the seed & feed for someone’s term paper?
Like the one needed by that psych major
The one penned about a past due “makeup”
As you know…this ain’t math.. Nor is it rocket science
But it can & does support an avid reader’s reliance
Wherein one can near-ace at the lab with a drop on a “good breakup”
The one that’s now past due for a past due make up
Where saved by the bell is what’s called a nice post-up
From rejection to Correction; to that tuition protection
Just credit me a footnote on my NEXT selection!
End of Collection.
[right]*feeding Aish's pet peeve
...[/right]
rayheinrich
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Death Plane for Teddy
Tyrant of Words
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if the webmiz would put our delete button back you wouldn't be reading this!!
see below
rayheinrich
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Death Plane for Teddy
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# 7
the poster says
"to be announced"
but why put a poster like that up?
maybe it should say:
"i wanted to tell you that i haven't made up my mind
as to what the fuck i will tell you so you'll just have to wait
but at least i'm being polite enough to tell you i don't really
know what the fuck is coming up and i don't even know
(and you'll have to excuse this personal aside on a poster this public)
what i'm going to be wearing tomorrow
hell i don't even know what i'm wearing right now
except for the shoes
i know which shoes i'm wearing
it's those ones with the really complex soles with the tiny groves
that take forever to get dog shit out of
and they swirl around making shapes that slightly resemble the water
at night
under the bridge down the block that's deep and scares me
because i always start to feel what it would be like to fall in
from standing too close which i always do and it would just take
some loose gravel a slight twitch from a tired knee or me
so i wanted to tell you that i haven't made up my mind
and that's why i put the poster up"
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Naseer
Nas
Joined 13th May 2012
Forum Posts: 55
Nas
Lost Thinker
Forum Posts: 55
No.6 eh? Kudos for thinking outside the box kriti
And of course #7. Lemy that was damn right funny. the curtains helping darkness stay put in my room say your humour is twisted..
(It's the P.S. right? DM me guys)
And of course #7. Lemy that was damn right funny. the curtains helping darkness stay put in my room say your humour is twisted..
(It's the P.S. right? DM me guys)
rayheinrich
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Death Plane for Teddy
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Naseer said:(It's the P.S. right? DM me guys)
[b]
# 8
DM Dry Matter (weight of cattle feed excluding water)
DM Disease Management
DM Depeche Mode (band)
DM Dubai Municipality (United Arab Emirates)
DM Dopamine
DM Dermatomyositis (Immune disease affecting skin and muscles)
DM Deformable Mirror
DM Duel Monsters
DM Deferred Maintenance
DM Dystrophia Myotonica
DM Detachable Magazine
DM Degraded Minute
DM Dispositif Médicaux (French: Medical Device)
DM Diphenylaminechloroarsine (adamsite, a chemical nerve agent)
DM Delusional Man
DM Danger Mouse
DM Daughters of Mary of the Immaculate Conception (religious order)
DM Dead Milkmen
yes
[b]
# 8
DM Dry Matter (weight of cattle feed excluding water)
DM Disease Management
DM Depeche Mode (band)
DM Dubai Municipality (United Arab Emirates)
DM Dopamine
DM Dermatomyositis (Immune disease affecting skin and muscles)
DM Deformable Mirror
DM Duel Monsters
DM Deferred Maintenance
DM Dystrophia Myotonica
DM Detachable Magazine
DM Degraded Minute
DM Dispositif Médicaux (French: Medical Device)
DM Diphenylaminechloroarsine (adamsite, a chemical nerve agent)
DM Delusional Man
DM Danger Mouse
DM Daughters of Mary of the Immaculate Conception (religious order)
DM Dead Milkmen
yes
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Naseer
Nas
Joined 13th May 2012
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Nas
Lost Thinker
Forum Posts: 55
rayheinrich said:[quote-89930-Naseer](It's the P.S. right? DM me guys)
[b]
# 8
DM Dry Matter (weight of cattle feed excluding water)
DM Disease Management
DM Depeche Mode (band)
DM Dubai Municipality (United Arab Emirates)
DM Dopamine
DM Dermatomyositis (Immune disease affecting skin and muscles)
DM Deformable Mirror
DM Duel Monsters
DM Deferred Maintenance
DM Dystrophia Myotonica
DM Detachable Magazine
DM Degraded Minute
DM Dispositif Médicaux (French: Medical Device)
DM Diphenylaminechloroarsine (adamsite, a chemical nerve agent)
DM Delusional Man
DM Danger Mouse
DM Daughters of Mary of the Immaculate Conception (religious order)
DM Dead Milkmen
yes
[/quote]
Lemmy my sane friend. I value you...
(P.S Side Note: DM Direct Message)
"Later we'll all die" said the gator to the fly
[b]
# 8
DM Dry Matter (weight of cattle feed excluding water)
DM Disease Management
DM Depeche Mode (band)
DM Dubai Municipality (United Arab Emirates)
DM Dopamine
DM Dermatomyositis (Immune disease affecting skin and muscles)
DM Deformable Mirror
DM Duel Monsters
DM Deferred Maintenance
DM Dystrophia Myotonica
DM Detachable Magazine
DM Degraded Minute
DM Dispositif Médicaux (French: Medical Device)
DM Diphenylaminechloroarsine (adamsite, a chemical nerve agent)
DM Delusional Man
DM Danger Mouse
DM Daughters of Mary of the Immaculate Conception (religious order)
DM Dead Milkmen
yes
[/quote]
Lemmy my sane friend. I value you...
(P.S Side Note: DM Direct Message)
"Later we'll all die" said the gator to the fly
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