Poetry competition CLOSED 11th April 2012 12:35pm
WINNER
BleedingInferno219 (Kristyn Ashley.)
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My first love..

Devilish
Dangerous Mind
United States 15awards
Joined 24th July 2011
Forum Posts: 1722

Awee.. Thank you all so much.. im saturated with this... and thank you Pravus I will..

uniqueshaky
Twisted Dreamer
Wales 1awards
Joined 24th Jan 2012
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kristinakarate said:Your poem hit me where it hurts... What are your feelings on having a stanza of this poem tattoed on someone? :)

Were you talking to me?

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diddi
Paul Summerscales
Dangerous Mind
United Kingdom 36awards
Joined 18th Dec 2009
Forum Posts: 1592

On Your Wall

Blonde and bountiful
but dark and dusky
fond of and accountable
lovable but lusty
not cheap but affordable
to keep and unsellable
excitable
and lightable
intellectual
and perfectional
flammable
and confectional
annexable
and flexible
a connectable
but sexual  
a sensual conversational
an observational
self preservational
loving but insatiable
my apple valley girl
in my world
a must to have
to you I'll crawl
you turn on the smiles  
from a few thousand miles
I am the paper
on your wall .

diddi
Paul Summerscales
Dangerous Mind
United Kingdom 36awards
Joined 18th Dec 2009
Forum Posts: 1592

Against All Odds     ( Written in 2010 )    


Memories are clutched
in the hands that point time
flocculent skies did touch
the turning of the dial
love is such
the contrary of denial
barefoot in the dust
we married without an aisle .

Against all odds
and across the waves
we of the same pod
that god
had gave
the path we trod
is how we were saved
together we rock
untethered
to the grave .

Memories are clutched
in the hands that point time
the future holds so much
like unpenned lines
new seconds they crush
the doubts that fly
all mouths will hush
that ever lied
together we'll push
together we'll die
I married my love
with the Indian eyes    
your soul comes flush
with your mind
of surprise
your heart is plush
with a golden
magnetise .



diddi
Paul Summerscales
Dangerous Mind
United Kingdom 36awards
Joined 18th Dec 2009
Forum Posts: 1592

Prismatic  Atlantic      


If there's one thing
you should know
you make the dull ring
then lift up everything
which invented new colours
in my rainbow .

You hypnotise with your
Indian eyes
they visualise as much
as they cry
your rainbow it goes
straight into my mind
where all colour
explodes
a place only you and I know
you make a blackhole
reverse and re-glow
in a collective , prismatic
protective
infatic
a selection
of direction
it's so mentally ecstatic
your inter-galactic
and extra attractive
emotional
commotional
in my mad erratic
mind of elastic
where I stretch to you
through the blue , prismatic
of Atlantic
no more underhanded tactic
or life of a plastic
or accused
then abused , some more
locked outside
my own front door
no longer is my esteem poor
and no more ceilings
as the floor
my mind is mine
and you own yours
I just can't wait to grace
your shores
once again
forever more
there's only you
that I implore
we go right through
each others core
you fixed all tears
that others tore
you go where no one's  
been before .

 

Grace
ldryad
Guardian of Shadows
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Joined 25th Aug 2011
Forum Posts: 6318

First Love

Loving you
at first glance
staring at you
pictured
in the wall of my memories
My first love
untarnished by life
and its fickleness
Gone forever
In the mist of time
Alive eternally
in my mind's eye
and my heart's playground.
You left this world
to travel in another
leaving me cold
on hearth of clover
wishes unshared
tears unshed
love unspoken
loving you always
my first love.

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