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Broken bones and blood of the enemy!!!

GivingWrath
Strange Creature
United States
Joined 27th Dec 2011
Forum Posts: 7

Poetry Contest

mix darkness with adrenaline
2 weeks

unlimted posts

no colabs.

SychophanticSlag
Carla
Dangerous Mind
United States 5awards
Joined 24th May 2011
Forum Posts: 1957

I'm not taking part, but I must let you know I smile at your Escape The Fate icon.

diddi
Paul Summerscales
Dangerous Mind
United Kingdom 36awards
Joined 18th Dec 2009
Forum Posts: 1592

The Muffling Of The Drum        (SP Summerscales)

The low muffling
of the drum
the shackled shuffling
has just begun
the eerie clinking
were all sinking
its time to on yourself
point the gun  
the sea under shelf
has just risen
the fallen one
is sure to come
the overwhelm
of an under realm
Demon's man the helm
along with Satan
they try to teach  
through the rigor to reach
so I  beseech  
don't go off wiith them
where the flames of hell
they choke and swell
only for to fell and
replace the sun  
the beast he stands
he holds out reptile hands  
to summon up the sands
in a poisoned  ocean
your times over
the end is coming
no more earthly
mother
hell has  
just begun .



diddi
Paul Summerscales
Dangerous Mind
United Kingdom 36awards
Joined 18th Dec 2009
Forum Posts: 1592

The Hall Of The Damned         (SP Summerscales)

The scream of sheer death
it deflates your lungs
and rips out your breath  
it tears apart
the ventricles of your heart
like the demonic sounds
of a fallen angels harp
the evil flame forming faces
howl and burn mental ash traces
that lick your brain with hot pain
which lights up the dark
to show the insane
in their stark underworld  
of plughole down drain .

A soul stealing trident
Satan spiked and hell sent
tri pronged and wrapped  
in a serpent
stands arrow capped  
in an evil dominant
inside are trapped spirits of unrepent
and infinite , expirement
they ache for your
desperate , detriment
and life retirement

So how can you be here
if your not dead yet
a demon leans near and says
this is what you might get
only fear if you gamble
and lose the bet
your soul so dear
shall be speared in an eternal net

The hall of the damned
full of gone murderers that hanged  
now they're hell framed
their pictured in pain
forever tortured  
dead and inane
they cry out contorted,  
faintly my name
as I leave Satans
emporium of reign
I know after this
that I'll play the right game
and never shall I diss
the lords name ever again ,
nor dare never shall I speak it
in vain .
 

diddi
Paul Summerscales
Dangerous Mind
United Kingdom 36awards
Joined 18th Dec 2009
Forum Posts: 1592

Goodnight World     (SP Summerscales)

The ferris wheel
is in black and white
I can feel
the air is tight
as it turns
under a solar eclipse
that still burns
now the day is night .
Slow motion sounds
echoes of a fist
that pounds
lips gently kiss
goodnight to a done sound
were all dead
hello hell hounds
hydrated heads
implode to a new found
earthen beds uproot the
soil of black
as bones walk around
into shape they crack
judgement day
is abound
there is no way
of ever going back

diddi
Paul Summerscales
Dangerous Mind
United Kingdom 36awards
Joined 18th Dec 2009
Forum Posts: 1592

The hell fuck ground (of misunderstood)      (SP Summerscales)

This persistance
we call existance
has to return to ring
to continuity
or sing aloud
misunderstood throws out the shroud
and alas no connectivity
is aloud
a fucking travesty
to the fuck awful
unlawful
cavity
inside and bound
by a lack of clarity
I think
to sink
down
to the hellfuck ground
my hands cover my crown
another
of all mothers
twat faced
and shit laced
yet again clowns
why not
is a word forgot
I tell you this
for I will not
take the piss
or wield the poisoned hiss
or the fatal
apple eden
bullshit kiss
for I know
the show's like this
it blows
out your nose
as the breeze
from your sneeze
and the crap
from your ass
never  recedes
to end
so don't ever dare
call me
a rare fucking friend .



diddi
Paul Summerscales
Dangerous Mind
United Kingdom 36awards
Joined 18th Dec 2009
Forum Posts: 1592

Cadaver  Re_animate    ( SP Summerscales)

Church bells
and pitched roof of slate
in silence after they rang
a train went through a burial gate
a bird broke forth and sang.
tombstones anticipate
the rising of dead man
a rumbling underground  
of shake
the drum begins to pound
cadaver  re-animate
with a snapping , gristle sound
empty socket skulls awake
boney hands claw the ground
they scratch and scrape
the damp streets late
with gutteral , corpse , throat sound
looking for a life to take
with dragging steps unbound .


GivingWrath
Strange Creature
United States
Joined 27th Dec 2011
Forum Posts: 7

i have to SP you are quite the writer......keep it up!

Chandler
Gleana Snipoms
Thought Provoker
United States 2awards
Joined 8th Sep 2011
Forum Posts: 270

Even though I'm not entering, I will have to agree... Summerscales, you could write an amazing book of poems.

diddi
Paul Summerscales
Dangerous Mind
United Kingdom 36awards
Joined 18th Dec 2009
Forum Posts: 1592

GivingWrath said:i have to SP you are quite the writer......keep it up!  

Hey thanks man I appreciate it

diddi
Paul Summerscales
Dangerous Mind
United Kingdom 36awards
Joined 18th Dec 2009
Forum Posts: 1592

Chandler said:Even though I'm not entering, I will have to agree... Summerscales, you could write an amazing book of poems.

thanks chandler , you have some good poetry also I have to say :)

GivingWrath
Strange Creature
United States
Joined 27th Dec 2011
Forum Posts: 7

yes Chandler ive read some of your work also, I love it!

diddi
Paul Summerscales
Dangerous Mind
United Kingdom 36awards
Joined 18th Dec 2009
Forum Posts: 1592

A Silent Thunder  (SP Summerscales)


The horses run  
a silent thunder
crimson scars
the sky their under
solar heats
the blood , boiling over
rotten wood
it forms some cover
as I watch , the sky
to wonder
is it nigh
the calling
of all numbers .

Satellite , bright
ultra violent light  

big seas
are getting deeper
honey bees
becoming sleepier
all the trees
are now much thinner
all the rain
is like paint stripper
life the train
driven by a killer
who's insane
and a public figure
a household name
maybe
Jack The Ripper
out of hell's chains
finger on
the trigger
to blow out
your brains
into the bigger
picture .

The horses run  
a silent thunder
crimson scars
the sky their under
I wonder why
they run for cover
the end is nigh
listen for
your number .




 

diddi
Paul Summerscales
Dangerous Mind
United Kingdom 36awards
Joined 18th Dec 2009
Forum Posts: 1592

Red Rigor   (SP Summerscales)

Here they come
they stagger in their scum
dragging their limbs
where all feeling has gone
slipping in their skin
with a lipless grin
intestinal drooling
from the rot of within .

Menacing and moaning
a grimacing of groaning
red rigor death showing
the dead figures
are approaching .

Twisted body beetle
black fisted
dripping treacle
dead carcus
powered evil
here they come
in shells of people .

Cadavers , animate
through death
they live to take
the hours you wont awake
you cower , capitulate
the hour
is getting late
they scour ,
cerebal intake
you know it's all over
as they eat your skin cover.



nagasaki
pittyfulmind
Twisted Dreamer
South Africa 2awards
Joined 8th Dec 2011
Forum Posts: 66

run rebel run

even though you stand your ground
hands shaking and trembling
even though you make no sound
some things worth remembering

what is right, no space for wrong
stand up, be tough
be brave, be strong
for now we have had enough

they point their guns and throw their smoke
their wickedness knows no end
while we cough and we choke
stand up, we have to defend

get your weapons, get your guns
hide away your wives
say goodbye to your sons
tell them to enjoy their lives

we run and the ground starts to shake
today we become kings
history we now will make
revenge fucking stings

break their bones as iron meets face
bullets whizz on by
pull your pistols from their case
shoot them till they die

helmets flying as they bleed
riot police down!
now we plant the future seed
stare upon my frown

blood and steel upon the street
smoke fills the sky
god today i will meet
tell my children not to cry




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