Poetry competition CLOSED 25th January 2012 9:23am
WINNER
cjmshadow (Caleb)
cjmshadow (Caleb)
RUNNER-UP:
diddi
1st broken heart
A You without I ( SP Summerscales )
I await
for our future times
a golden spiked gate
amid the summer vines
can I compensate
for past written lines
myself I hate
because I made you cry
don't ever hesitate
or wonder why
for you I wait
under the crying sky
I capitulate
and inside I die
my mind frustrates
through a rubies eye
my heart you golden plate
then my soul it flies
yours I could not break
for I'd rather die
if I turn to flakes
and blow off in a sigh
its because I could not take
a you without I
I await
for our future times
a golden spiked gate
amid the summer vines
can I compensate
for past written lines
myself I hate
because I made you cry
don't ever hesitate
or wonder why
for you I wait
under the crying sky
I capitulate
and inside I die
my mind frustrates
through a rubies eye
my heart you golden plate
then my soul it flies
yours I could not break
for I'd rather die
if I turn to flakes
and blow off in a sigh
its because I could not take
a you without I
diddi said:A You without I ( SP Summerscales )
I await
for our future times
a golden spiked gate
amid the summer vines
can I compensate
for past written lines
myself I hate
because I made you cry
don't ever hesitate
or wonder why
for you I wait
under the crying sky
I capitulate
and inside I die
my mind frustrates
through a rubies eye
my heart you golden plate
then my soul it flies
yours I could not break
for I'd rather die
if I turn to flakes
and blow off in a sigh
its because I could not take
a you without I
You never fail to amaze me.
I await
for our future times
a golden spiked gate
amid the summer vines
can I compensate
for past written lines
myself I hate
because I made you cry
don't ever hesitate
or wonder why
for you I wait
under the crying sky
I capitulate
and inside I die
my mind frustrates
through a rubies eye
my heart you golden plate
then my soul it flies
yours I could not break
for I'd rather die
if I turn to flakes
and blow off in a sigh
its because I could not take
a you without I
You never fail to amaze me.
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raorrick said:[quote-56841-diddi]A You without I ( SP Summerscales )
I await
for our future times
a golden spiked gate
amid the summer vines
can I compensate
for past written lines
myself I hate
because I made you cry
don't ever hesitate
or wonder why
for you I wait
under the crying sky
I capitulate
and inside I die
my mind frustrates
through a rubies eye
my heart you golden plate
then my soul it flies
yours I could not break
for I'd rather die
if I turn to flakes
and blow off in a sigh
its because I could not take
a you without I
You never fail to amaze me.[/quote]
Thanks rachael
I await
for our future times
a golden spiked gate
amid the summer vines
can I compensate
for past written lines
myself I hate
because I made you cry
don't ever hesitate
or wonder why
for you I wait
under the crying sky
I capitulate
and inside I die
my mind frustrates
through a rubies eye
my heart you golden plate
then my soul it flies
yours I could not break
for I'd rather die
if I turn to flakes
and blow off in a sigh
its because I could not take
a you without I
You never fail to amaze me.[/quote]
Thanks rachael
I am in love with a ghost
My heart is a haunted place,
Filled up by this ghostly space.
He was the first to love such a heart,
At least it seemed real at the start.
I was happy, I felt loved
Like the sun that meets the morning dove,
I felt safe within my heart's haunting,
Not knowing it would soon cave under its taunting.
He seemed real, he seemed solid, ready to stay.
But hidden deception was his way.
After all his coming and goings,
And all my heart's shadowed sowings;
I realized....
I am in love with a ghost.
I was ensnared and caught,
This ghost left such a fear within me,
Because who could love what a ghost could not?
My heart is a haunted place,
Filled up by this ghostly space.
He was the first to love such a heart,
At least it seemed real at the start.
I was happy, I felt loved
Like the sun that meets the morning dove,
I felt safe within my heart's haunting,
Not knowing it would soon cave under its taunting.
He seemed real, he seemed solid, ready to stay.
But hidden deception was his way.
After all his coming and goings,
And all my heart's shadowed sowings;
I realized....
I am in love with a ghost.
I was ensnared and caught,
This ghost left such a fear within me,
Because who could love what a ghost could not?
diddi said:A You without I ( SP Summerscales )
I await
for our future times
a golden spiked gate
amid the summer vines
can I compensate
for past written lines
myself I hate
because I made you cry
don't ever hesitate
or wonder why
for you I wait
under the crying sky
I capitulate
and inside I die
my mind frustrates
through a rubies eye
my heart you golden plate
then my soul it flies
yours I could not break
for I'd rather die
if I turn to flakes
and blow off in a sigh
its because I could not take
a you without I
my fave line: can I compensate
for past written lines
great line.
I await
for our future times
a golden spiked gate
amid the summer vines
can I compensate
for past written lines
myself I hate
because I made you cry
don't ever hesitate
or wonder why
for you I wait
under the crying sky
I capitulate
and inside I die
my mind frustrates
through a rubies eye
my heart you golden plate
then my soul it flies
yours I could not break
for I'd rather die
if I turn to flakes
and blow off in a sigh
its because I could not take
a you without I
my fave line: can I compensate
for past written lines
great line.
diddi said:[quote-57788-opheliac]Colourless Dawn
You brought the colours
of dawn into my life
but you had to leave
at sunset.
thank you opheliac your kind and also your words as always are very beautiful , I love how you encapsulate so much in a few lines , a mark of talent for sure[/quote]
don't mention it. your poetry is very inspiring. you're being kind; thank you
You brought the colours
of dawn into my life
but you had to leave
at sunset.
thank you opheliac your kind and also your words as always are very beautiful , I love how you encapsulate so much in a few lines , a mark of talent for sure
[/quote] don't mention it. your poetry is very inspiring. you're being kind; thank you
