Poetry competition CLOSED 4th January 2012 6:43am
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dustyjjewels
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RUNNER-UP: DarcAnGeL

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I Wish I Was

Posted: 3rd January 2012 1:12am
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Posted: 3rd January 2012 1:33am
diddi
diddi
Paul Summerscales
Dangerous Mind
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Harper83 said:[quote-56177-diddi]I Wish I Was Me    

I wish I was me
a long time it has been
since ever feeling
the way I used to feel
on the external
I appear as I should be
but the inner inferno
my strive for life
is burning low
my youth , my sight
where did it go
I used to fight
for the right of my call
but I'm losing height
everytime that I fall
my direction signs
are misguided and wrong
I need all sides
a high five
pentagon
to help me find
the trust I
know has gone
as I've not felt myself
in gone times
for so long  .




Paul, this is beautiful, very nice work :)[/quote]  


Thanks harpsy :))))

Posted: 4th January 2012 1:46pm
Whitewand6
Whitewand6
Dangerous Mind
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This competition ended today?

Verdict?

Posted: 4th January 2012 1:56pm
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Posted: 5th January 2012 8:52am
Grace
Grace
ldryad
Guardian of Shadows
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Congratulations, dustyjjewels for winning the competition and to DarcAnGeL for being runny up. Yay!!! *claps* Good work.     

Posted: 6th January 2012 1:36am
DarcAnGeL
DarcAnGeL
Araweelo
Twisted Dreamer
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thanx Grace! congratz dustyjjewels for the win and thanx starstruck13 for running such a great comp.

Posted: 6th January 2012 1:42am
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Posted: 8th January 2012 2:16pm
dustyjjewels
dustyjjewels
Fire of Insight
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Joined 24th Nov 2011
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dustyjjewels said:I wish I was a honeybee
Hanging with my kind in a colony
Flying without patting my feathers
Robing beautiful flowers of their nectar
I would sing as i bring
Sweet liquid for the queen within
I'd be a soldier in defense I'd sting
A worker I'd work for the collective
You can visit our comb
We'll feed you honey
Just make sure you are not noticed
Cos life as a bee's far from hospitality

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