Poetry competition CLOSED 23rd November 2011 8:21pm
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Grace (ldryad)
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Paulina Dionne
Fire of Insight
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Joined 9th Apr 2011
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sweet godess


Sing sweet godess
cry outside a dream
wander beneath drunk visions
chant a symphony

love sweet godess
water the rose
manipulate and rip
death outside a shadow

cry sweet godess
eternity is essential

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Dangerous Mind
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Joined 22nd Aug 2011
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While walking by the seashore I picked up a seashell
Sipping wine on the beach when i found the perfect smell
At the edge of the ocean, she was watching the sunset
And the little kids were building sand castles and some guy was buried to his neck
And this lady was eating crab legs and shrimp while listening to heavy metal
And that's when i saw her eyes, they were as soft as a rose petal
"Rip" was the only word on the halter top that she made look so raw
Some would lick her flesh judging by only what they saw
And the way she was sitting there
A real man would just have to stare
Her hair looked so fluff by the turquoise colored shore
The next breeze to blow will allow her sweet aroma to soar
That luscious, sweet smell found my nose just right
I told her to watch out now, but you smell good enough to bite
A goddess on the outside, the vision of a dream
Forest fires couldn't hold the heat of this bitter sweet scene


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Dangerous Mind
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Joined 22nd Aug 2011
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the bitter sweet pink apparatus of Love
manipulates elaborate mist rose above
outside beneath breasts water soars
essential wet dreams rip the luscious shore
some lick....blow....bite
raw Beauty crushed under knife
death whispers....void of sleep
drunk wine....next ecstatic chants to sing

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Dangerous Mind
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Joined 22nd Aug 2011
Forum Posts: 3008

i did 2 because in the 1st 1 i just used the words in the order they were listed....i got up to 32....thats 4 8s....lol....but after looking at the other entries i did the second using only the words in your list....with the exception of the occassional articles a & the & the preposition of

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ldryad
Guardian of Shadows
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Joined 25th Aug 2011
Forum Posts: 6318

Reaching for you

Gentle waves at the seashore
There you stood, a seashell on your hand
Your dreamy face the colour of wine
Washed by the blazing sunset

At that beach, staring towards the ocean
Lips in half smile, like petals
Caught in sweet repose
Your turquoise eyes stare

On that eternal shore
As the wind blow
My heart was ripped raw
With the sight of you

Building a sand castle
In my mind, a fluff
Of imagining, a subtle
Sweet dream, a vision

Outside my vision,
Some crabbed and shrimped
They lived, they love they wander on
They elaborated on life, their own

Within the you and me
In our own garden in the forest
Watching you next to me
Tombstone, a mark, no word spoken, just rest

I remembered when you took me away
The touch of your luscious lips
The way you licked and bite
Ecstatic, I soared, drunk in the symphony

Like a goddess by the lake
I birthed manipulations
To sway the sea, white crested waves
Thundering beyond the mists

“Blow bitter wind,
Above me, o’ rain do fall,
I chant this bitter song
To bring back my lover’s soul”

Knife in my hand, I sang
Asking the powers above
I chanted incantations
I sang, whispered, entreat, o’love

The thousand names of the gods
Arrayed in purple, dressed in diamonds
Death in its shadows
Beauty of darkness beneath

What language speaks death?
What eternity do I traverse?
Do I kneel in worship?
Beat these gorgeous breasts?

I cried to the void
Through the darkness of under
Green nature is gone, sleep
Fled, I was crushed

Here I stand near the water
The blue sea yonder turned black
The pink and red roses at the corner
Of my vision faded now

Why am I alone again?
Through this life I traverse on
Alone like a silly apparatus
Under a dark sky, with wet cheeks.

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Levi
Dangerous Mind
United States 14awards
Joined 6th Apr 2011
Forum Posts: 2016

My Goddess bites, licking my red sea
Giving me eternity on the beach

heres a vampire couplet

passionatepoet
Lost Thinker
United States
Joined 26th Oct 2011
Forum Posts: 2

Dream Sleep


Petal pink
Wine red
Ocean blue
Some turquoise stare
Fluffed sweetly under
A crushed sunset

The shadows manipulating
A thousand diamonds
Luscious white licks
Beneath a black void

Chanting drunk whispers
Wandering beneath a gorgeous death

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