Poetry competition CLOSED 8th December 2011 5:37pm
WINNER
lepperochan (CraicDealer)
lepperochan (CraicDealer)
RUNNER-UP:
kriticool
Cliche Heaven
Dark side of the Sun
What kind of luck to be in a coma
and be knocked awake by a vision
The house trembles
And what use a table with flaccid legs
for children to take shelter
when the earth quakes
Does one simply build a new table
or charge headlong into the fault
to absorb any aftershock
Helpless is the one with a strong pull
when Venus rules the heart
and Mars the head
No matter, words are useless as wet sand
when trying to translate the mind
primary,20 secondary's 12 16
What kind of luck to be in a coma
and be knocked awake by a vision
The house trembles
And what use a table with flaccid legs
for children to take shelter
when the earth quakes
Does one simply build a new table
or charge headlong into the fault
to absorb any aftershock
Helpless is the one with a strong pull
when Venus rules the heart
and Mars the head
No matter, words are useless as wet sand
when trying to translate the mind
primary,20 secondary's 12 16
wow! my first first placing.
so many great entries, i am humbled.
I would like to thank Jess for a great comp. My agent for telling me about it.
All the great poets who entered shit poems so mine would stand out.
congrats to kriticool :)
so many great entries, i am humbled.
I would like to thank Jess for a great comp. My agent for telling me about it.
All the great poets who entered shit poems so mine would stand out.
congrats to kriticool :)
