All Poems Seeking Honest Critique
POEMS AND SHORT STORIES
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zczcd
zczcz
#boyfriend
#rejection
31 reads
0 Comments
dsfdsf
sdfddsf
#lover
24 reads
0 Comments
asS
ASAsasaS
#lover
23 reads
1 Comment
swasSa
sSsaasa
#anger
#lover
28 reads
6 Comments
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#lover
18 reads
1 Comment
adawdwad
dadasd
#lover
20 reads
0 Comments
adsdas
sdasd
#dark
#soldiers
#romantic #abuse
#romantic #abuse
24 reads
0 Comments
asdsd
sdadas
#depression
#dark
#holiday
30 reads
0 Comments
dfs
sdfdsfdsffds
#depression
#birth
#BestFriend #silence
#BestFriend #silence
14 reads
0 Comments
Proudly
Find me a mask
hypocrisy is my past
I can not go forward, honest ’
with my mask in hand
I will show my brand
from now on
Proudly ‘
hypocrisy is my past
I can not go forward, honest ’
with my mask in hand
I will show my brand
from now on
Proudly ‘
45 reads
4 Comments
Rubber Duckies
Bathe you’re me in the sins of
someone else
so I can feel guilty for more shit
I haven't done,
be sure to rub me with salts
from the dead sea
cause it seems completely fitting.
someone else
so I can feel guilty for more shit
I haven't done,
be sure to rub me with salts
from the dead sea
cause it seems completely fitting.
75 reads
1 Comment
.:SCSC:.
survey
circumvent
suppress & collect
slogans
over & over
most; most will
forget
yet one
won’t forget
the blood
and the sweat
the grit in the wind; the
crack of the
tech
the wrong
of the round
piercing that neck
the shriek
of the mother; gone
her connect
the brother who cries, “take the head from that neck”
the collapsing father
down
on the deck
his hands in the sand; he
cannot protect
these
are
the wars...
circumvent
suppress & collect
slogans
over & over
most; most will
forget
yet one
won’t forget
the blood
and the sweat
the grit in the wind; the
crack of the
tech
the wrong
of the round
piercing that neck
the shriek
of the mother; gone
her connect
the brother who cries, “take the head from that neck”
the collapsing father
down
on the deck
his hands in the sand; he
cannot protect
these
are
the wars...
30 reads
2 Comments
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